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A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
I have made several copy edits to the article, mostly for sentence structure. Please review and revise anything I screwed up.
Thanks for the copyedits. I did go back and change a few of your tweaks just to match what I remember from the sources.
The lead is a little short, but passable. Nothing vital is missing.
"an onboard electric battery" - I'm almost certain electric is redundant, but the possibility of a technical distinction means I've leaving it for you to decide.
I've decided to remove it.
According to
local improvement district, the term is specific to Canada. I'll let you decide if it should stay linked.
I will change the redirect to a description of the American version, which is in use by several states.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
I have made several copy edits to the article, mostly for sentence structure. Please review and revise anything I screwed up.
Thanks for the copyedits. I did go back and change a few of your tweaks just to match what I remember from the sources.
The lead is a little short, but passable. Nothing vital is missing.
"an onboard electric battery" - I'm almost certain electric is redundant, but the possibility of a technical distinction means I've leaving it for you to decide.
I've decided to remove it.
According to
local improvement district, the term is specific to Canada. I'll let you decide if it should stay linked.
I will change the redirect to a description of the American version, which is in use by several states.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.