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second at an Olympics hosted outside the United States. , mention in body too + source or just omit. Suggesting to omit
Done
With nine medals total, the Final Five is the most decorated American Olympic gymnastics team., As of [YEAR],....
Done
Team background
dubbed the Fierce Five, at the 2012 London Olympics, add comma at the end.
Done
With 10 gold medals total, , spell out as ten.
MOS:NUMERAL
Done
becoming the first American women, woman as it's referring to Biles.
Done
alongside Douglas and Raisman, 2016 U.S. Classic, add comma at the end.
Done
Then at the National Championships, Then, at the National Championships.
Done
fourth-straight, remove hyphen.
Done
Olympic Trials
for the Olympic team with, add comma after team.
Done
Captain and nickname
age 22, suggest saying it as 22 years old.
Done
The team members chose the name Final Five before the Olympic Games,, I'm guessing the italicization is for emphasis? Use the templates provided in
Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Emphasis, rather than apostrophes.
Done switched to quotation marks, although those can be removed if needed.
made up of four athletes, add comma at the end.
Done
2016 Summer Olympics
Instances of on uneven bars and on the uneven bars and other apparatus, would suggest to stick with the latter to maintain consistency.
Done All instances should be fixed now
over points ahead of Raisman, list how many points.
Overall, the Final Five won nine Olympic medals, making them the most decorated American gymnastics team in history, As of....
Done
Post-Olympics
Hernandez returned to completion in 2021, guessing it should be competition.
Done
postponed-2020 Olympic Games, remove hyphen.
Done
plus one of the three alternates, who?
Locklear, information added. Done
Gallery
I suggest removing, since they're featured in the first image shown. But per
Wikipedia:Image use policy#Image galleries, a bit iffy. Though I heavily suggest removing it since they would be mentioned in the first image.
Done
Images
Images have proper licenses.
List down members of the "Final Five" in the image caption seen in the lead. Clarify the members from left-to-right, per the tag.
Done
The Final Five celebrating after winning the Women's Team All-Around at the 2016 Summer Olympics, caption on second image. Uncapitalize Women's Team All-Around.
Refs
Earwig pass.
Manual pass.
Spotchecks
Ref 36, seems good.
Ref 49, seems good.
Honestly, all of the sources seem pretty nice, standard sources someone would use in a sports article, pass. :)
Misc
No ongoing edit war, pretty broad information on the topic, neutral.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
second at an Olympics hosted outside the United States. , mention in body too + source or just omit. Suggesting to omit
Done
With nine medals total, the Final Five is the most decorated American Olympic gymnastics team., As of [YEAR],....
Done
Team background
dubbed the Fierce Five, at the 2012 London Olympics, add comma at the end.
Done
With 10 gold medals total, , spell out as ten.
MOS:NUMERAL
Done
becoming the first American women, woman as it's referring to Biles.
Done
alongside Douglas and Raisman, 2016 U.S. Classic, add comma at the end.
Done
Then at the National Championships, Then, at the National Championships.
Done
fourth-straight, remove hyphen.
Done
Olympic Trials
for the Olympic team with, add comma after team.
Done
Captain and nickname
age 22, suggest saying it as 22 years old.
Done
The team members chose the name Final Five before the Olympic Games,, I'm guessing the italicization is for emphasis? Use the templates provided in
Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Emphasis, rather than apostrophes.
Done switched to quotation marks, although those can be removed if needed.
made up of four athletes, add comma at the end.
Done
2016 Summer Olympics
Instances of on uneven bars and on the uneven bars and other apparatus, would suggest to stick with the latter to maintain consistency.
Done All instances should be fixed now
over points ahead of Raisman, list how many points.
Overall, the Final Five won nine Olympic medals, making them the most decorated American gymnastics team in history, As of....
Done
Post-Olympics
Hernandez returned to completion in 2021, guessing it should be competition.
Done
postponed-2020 Olympic Games, remove hyphen.
Done
plus one of the three alternates, who?
Locklear, information added. Done
Gallery
I suggest removing, since they're featured in the first image shown. But per
Wikipedia:Image use policy#Image galleries, a bit iffy. Though I heavily suggest removing it since they would be mentioned in the first image.
Done
Images
Images have proper licenses.
List down members of the "Final Five" in the image caption seen in the lead. Clarify the members from left-to-right, per the tag.
Done
The Final Five celebrating after winning the Women's Team All-Around at the 2016 Summer Olympics, caption on second image. Uncapitalize Women's Team All-Around.
Refs
Earwig pass.
Manual pass.
Spotchecks
Ref 36, seems good.
Ref 49, seems good.
Honestly, all of the sources seem pretty nice, standard sources someone would use in a sports article, pass. :)
Misc
No ongoing edit war, pretty broad information on the topic, neutral.