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Interview with the producer and the composer - http://gamasutra.com/view/news/33763/Interview_Serializing_RPG_Storylines_On_Final_Fantasy_Legends.php -- Pres N 22:37, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Some info from famitsu that apparently has some bits on the original soundtrack. - http://www.famitsu.com/news/201108/08048167.html -- Lucia Black ( talk) 03:56, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
Another one from famitsu. Also holds interviews but unsure if its the same one of gamasutra as it shows more developers - http://www.famitsu.com/news/201108/18048249.html -- Lucia Black ( talk) 04:01, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
http://www.famitsu.com/news/201206/08015998.html. One more. Lucia Black ( talk) 01:25, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
I just recently bought the game so i will be expanding story and character sections. Lucia Black ( talk) 03:04, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
Now that the article's main issue (the plot) has been cleaned up. I was wondering if this article meets the merits of B-class? Lucia Black ( talk) 22:40, 8 April 2013 (UTC)
ok im doing it now. Lucia Black ( talk) 22:35, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
Ok, thanks. Ill use the official site for the EZweb release and nominate it for GA. Lucia Black ( talk) 16:50, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
Right now, we've got a paragraph on the backstory, Prologue and Chapter 1 and a paragraph for each of the three sections of Chapter 4, but Chapters 2 and 3 are just sort of vaguely alluded to in a couple sentences of the first paragraph. IMO we could use at least a paragraph or two on chapters 2 and 3 (maybe split between the light side and dark side storylines to avoid bloat from excessive "meanwhile"s), with a sentence or two for each tale (such as "In The Memorist's Sorrow, the Warriors of Light find and team up with Argy, an amnesiac robot, and find and infiltrate an imperial shipyard to sabotage the construction of the Heliogabalus, a colossal airship."). That would work out to about 1-2 paragraphs and 8-16 sentences. -- Gordon Ecker ( talk) 04:38, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
Its too gamecruft to setup a plot by chapters. Do novel articles have their plots "in chapter X, Y revealed/happened"? Especially when its original release was not done by "chapters" but individual "episodes". Also, Vata's back story is detailed enough. Youre missing the point of the plot section completely. Its to summarize it as best as possible and still give enough detail so that first time readers can understand it. The "compromise" is somehow decribing chapter 2 and 3 for about a sentence or two. Keep in mind, this compromise is for your benefit alone and i could drop this if you push for something that will affect the plot negatively. Lucia Black ( talk) 12:01, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
Im going to try to reason with you one last time. Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 are incredibly detailed plots that.make very small key info to overall plot. This is the best way to have it. Not only that but the plot is also split between two parties with their plot being told simultaeniously. either we tell both stories in full detail or summarize the plot where it can be comprehensive. The only non linear issue is Elgo seemingly dying being prolonged a little more. And final fantasy XIII is anything but short. Lucia Black ( talk) 04:25, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
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I have decided to review this article for GA status. This will be expanded as I go along.-- (T) Numbermaniac (C) 02:59, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
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This is pretty good so far.
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Interview with the producer and the composer - http://gamasutra.com/view/news/33763/Interview_Serializing_RPG_Storylines_On_Final_Fantasy_Legends.php -- Pres N 22:37, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Some info from famitsu that apparently has some bits on the original soundtrack. - http://www.famitsu.com/news/201108/08048167.html -- Lucia Black ( talk) 03:56, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
Another one from famitsu. Also holds interviews but unsure if its the same one of gamasutra as it shows more developers - http://www.famitsu.com/news/201108/18048249.html -- Lucia Black ( talk) 04:01, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
http://www.famitsu.com/news/201206/08015998.html. One more. Lucia Black ( talk) 01:25, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
I just recently bought the game so i will be expanding story and character sections. Lucia Black ( talk) 03:04, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
Now that the article's main issue (the plot) has been cleaned up. I was wondering if this article meets the merits of B-class? Lucia Black ( talk) 22:40, 8 April 2013 (UTC)
ok im doing it now. Lucia Black ( talk) 22:35, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
Ok, thanks. Ill use the official site for the EZweb release and nominate it for GA. Lucia Black ( talk) 16:50, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
Right now, we've got a paragraph on the backstory, Prologue and Chapter 1 and a paragraph for each of the three sections of Chapter 4, but Chapters 2 and 3 are just sort of vaguely alluded to in a couple sentences of the first paragraph. IMO we could use at least a paragraph or two on chapters 2 and 3 (maybe split between the light side and dark side storylines to avoid bloat from excessive "meanwhile"s), with a sentence or two for each tale (such as "In The Memorist's Sorrow, the Warriors of Light find and team up with Argy, an amnesiac robot, and find and infiltrate an imperial shipyard to sabotage the construction of the Heliogabalus, a colossal airship."). That would work out to about 1-2 paragraphs and 8-16 sentences. -- Gordon Ecker ( talk) 04:38, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
Its too gamecruft to setup a plot by chapters. Do novel articles have their plots "in chapter X, Y revealed/happened"? Especially when its original release was not done by "chapters" but individual "episodes". Also, Vata's back story is detailed enough. Youre missing the point of the plot section completely. Its to summarize it as best as possible and still give enough detail so that first time readers can understand it. The "compromise" is somehow decribing chapter 2 and 3 for about a sentence or two. Keep in mind, this compromise is for your benefit alone and i could drop this if you push for something that will affect the plot negatively. Lucia Black ( talk) 12:01, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
Im going to try to reason with you one last time. Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 are incredibly detailed plots that.make very small key info to overall plot. This is the best way to have it. Not only that but the plot is also split between two parties with their plot being told simultaeniously. either we tell both stories in full detail or summarize the plot where it can be comprehensive. The only non linear issue is Elgo seemingly dying being prolonged a little more. And final fantasy XIII is anything but short. Lucia Black ( talk) 04:25, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Numbermaniac ( talk · contribs) 02:59, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
I have decided to review this article for GA status. This will be expanded as I go along.-- (T) Numbermaniac (C) 02:59, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This is pretty good so far.