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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:13, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
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I was originally going to put this article on hold because there were only minor mistakes. However, upon full review of the article, I have decided to fail the article at this time.
There were a few reasons that made this article from reaching good article status. To start with, the synopsis of the "Music video" section does not have any sources, making it violate
WP:NOR and
WP:VERIFY. Second, the "Charts" section does not use
Template:Singlechart for every chart. Third, the prose of the article could use some work. It needs to be proofread before the next good article nomination, which includes checking for grammar, spelling, etc. Fourth, the article could use some more references, as it only has 13 right now.
I believe that will all of the issues, it should be failed and not be put on-hold because of the length of all of this issues. However, you are welcome to renominate this article once all of the issues presented here have been addressed. Good luck next time.
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Rp0211
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22:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Introduction
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Conception
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Music video
Track listing
Charts
References
Jivesh • Talk2Me 04:59, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:13, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
OVERALL REVIEW
I was originally going to put this article on hold because there were only minor mistakes. However, upon full review of the article, I have decided to fail the article at this time.
There were a few reasons that made this article from reaching good article status. To start with, the synopsis of the "Music video" section does not have any sources, making it violate
WP:NOR and
WP:VERIFY. Second, the "Charts" section does not use
Template:Singlechart for every chart. Third, the prose of the article could use some work. It needs to be proofread before the next good article nomination, which includes checking for grammar, spelling, etc. Fourth, the article could use some more references, as it only has 13 right now.
I believe that will all of the issues, it should be failed and not be put on-hold because of the length of all of this issues. However, you are welcome to renominate this article once all of the issues presented here have been addressed. Good luck next time.
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Rp0211
(talk2me)
22:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
Introduction
Context
Conception
Release
Music video
Track listing
Charts
References
Jivesh • Talk2Me 04:59, 28 June 2011 (UTC)