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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 16:04, 10 November 2007 (UTC) reply


Copy editing and a little rephrasing
This doesn't read like a Wikipedia article. I think the tone/style needs to be polished, as well as the grammar. Should I just go ahead and slowly work on the sections? Any help on how to proceed would be greatly appreciated.
Spicypumpkin ( talk) 13:01, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply