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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC) reply


Will do this tomorrow JAGUAR  20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC) reply

  • ""Feelings" is a jazz song that is accompanied by a combination of African drums and beats" - link Rhythm in Sub-Saharan Africa
  • "She remarked that it is important for her to handle the production on her music" - of her music?
  • "unlike the majority of Zonke's catalog" - catalogue (South African spelling)
  • Channel O is linked twice in the beginning of the Reception section. On the second instance it is italicised, so does it need to be italicised or not?
  • "However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane instead won the award" - However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane won the award instead,
  • "During the singer's own Give and Take Live Tour" - 'the singer' seems redundant here, I'd just replace it with "her"
  • No dead links
  • No dab links

This is a neat and compact article. I couldn't find anything wrong with the sources and it the prose is well written, so once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go. JAGUAR  16:57, 21 October 2016 (UTC) reply

@ Jaguar: Thanks so much for your review! I have made all the changes you suggested above! Regards, Carbrera ( talk) 21:29, 21 October 2016 (UTC). reply
Thanks! Promoted. JAGUAR  10:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC) reply


Will do this tomorrow JAGUAR  20:43, 20 October 2016 (UTC) reply

  • ""Feelings" is a jazz song that is accompanied by a combination of African drums and beats" - link Rhythm in Sub-Saharan Africa
  • "She remarked that it is important for her to handle the production on her music" - of her music?
  • "unlike the majority of Zonke's catalog" - catalogue (South African spelling)
  • Channel O is linked twice in the beginning of the Reception section. On the second instance it is italicised, so does it need to be italicised or not?
  • "However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane instead won the award" - However, "Kulungile Baba" by Sifiso Ncwane won the award instead,
  • "During the singer's own Give and Take Live Tour" - 'the singer' seems redundant here, I'd just replace it with "her"
  • No dead links
  • No dab links

This is a neat and compact article. I couldn't find anything wrong with the sources and it the prose is well written, so once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go. JAGUAR  16:57, 21 October 2016 (UTC) reply

@ Jaguar: Thanks so much for your review! I have made all the changes you suggested above! Regards, Carbrera ( talk) 21:29, 21 October 2016 (UTC). reply
Thanks! Promoted. JAGUAR  10:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC) reply

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