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Everything looks good, I would only suggest to add a sentence or two about the aftermath.
Done.
Summary
Add a note explaining that Publius is a pseudonym used by James Madison, Alexander Hamilton and John Jay.
It already says that Publius is the pseudonym used to write the Federalist Papers. A general description of Publius belongs on the main Federalist Papers article.
How many states existed at the time of writing? Maybe clarify that if relevant.
Not sure if it's relevant, the point is that there are several that could come into conflict with one another.
A standing army for each state? If so clarify that, or put in the plural as you do in the next phrase.
Clarified in each case whether it's a national army or state armies.
Comma after "invaded" and before "which". Likewise, when describing the army of a nation infrequently invaded.
Added.
Background and publication
Here you link
standing army but the first instance is in the "Summary" section.
Fixed.
Analysis
Standing army
The correlation is positive or negative?
Specified an "increase".
Why did the modern advancements in industry made it difficult for men to give up their occupations to go to war?
Switched to "obligations in industry".
"Conversely, he acknowledged that this expansion of industry is what allowed advancements in warfare to develop", why is that so?
Specified "technological advancements".
Comma after "describe it".
Not sure what this is referring to.
Geographical advantage
Everything seems good here.
Aftermath
Is valor referencing
virtue ethics? If so a wikilink would be useful. (optional)
I don't believe it is.
Source
Done by 48JCL (see past revisions).
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Everything looks good, I would only suggest to add a sentence or two about the aftermath.
Done.
Summary
Add a note explaining that Publius is a pseudonym used by James Madison, Alexander Hamilton and John Jay.
It already says that Publius is the pseudonym used to write the Federalist Papers. A general description of Publius belongs on the main Federalist Papers article.
How many states existed at the time of writing? Maybe clarify that if relevant.
Not sure if it's relevant, the point is that there are several that could come into conflict with one another.
A standing army for each state? If so clarify that, or put in the plural as you do in the next phrase.
Clarified in each case whether it's a national army or state armies.
Comma after "invaded" and before "which". Likewise, when describing the army of a nation infrequently invaded.
Added.
Background and publication
Here you link
standing army but the first instance is in the "Summary" section.
Fixed.
Analysis
Standing army
The correlation is positive or negative?
Specified an "increase".
Why did the modern advancements in industry made it difficult for men to give up their occupations to go to war?
Switched to "obligations in industry".
"Conversely, he acknowledged that this expansion of industry is what allowed advancements in warfare to develop", why is that so?
Specified "technological advancements".
Comma after "describe it".
Not sure what this is referring to.
Geographical advantage
Everything seems good here.
Aftermath
Is valor referencing
virtue ethics? If so a wikilink would be useful. (optional)
I don't believe it is.
Source
Done by 48JCL (see past revisions).
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.