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Reviewer: ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 05:17, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
Before actually reviewing, I see several problems with the headings. "Background and composition" contains way too much information about other things, such as live performances. The next section is also titled "composition..." I'm not really sure how to explain what should be changed, I'd fix it up myself, but I'm not sure that's allowed. Maybe you could split the sections up a bit into:
Background and release
Composition
Reception and chart performance
Music video
Charts
Release history
References
And there's also two references titles, remove one.
I will review the whole article after these main headlines are fixed up. :) ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 16:11, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
No problem. I'm not really sure. I just feel like everything's in the article, it just needs some reorganization. I think the part about the performances should be moved to the lead, as it doesn't fit in a background and release section at all. After that, that section is fine. Just having the chart performance under it's own header would make that part fine as well. But now that I think about it, about the live performance, the lead mentions dancing with the stars performance, so if you got sources or something, I'm sure you could expand and make a section for live performances. But if not, that's fine, it could work fine in the lead. After that, I think I'd be pretty good. I don't think there will be much things left for the actual reviewing. (LOL) xD ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 05:08, 31 December 2010 (UTC)
Now that that is all situated, I can review the actual content of the article. :)
I am passing the article. :) ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 06:43, 1 January 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 05:17, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
Before actually reviewing, I see several problems with the headings. "Background and composition" contains way too much information about other things, such as live performances. The next section is also titled "composition..." I'm not really sure how to explain what should be changed, I'd fix it up myself, but I'm not sure that's allowed. Maybe you could split the sections up a bit into:
Background and release
Composition
Reception and chart performance
Music video
Charts
Release history
References
And there's also two references titles, remove one.
I will review the whole article after these main headlines are fixed up. :) ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 16:11, 30 December 2010 (UTC)
No problem. I'm not really sure. I just feel like everything's in the article, it just needs some reorganization. I think the part about the performances should be moved to the lead, as it doesn't fit in a background and release section at all. After that, that section is fine. Just having the chart performance under it's own header would make that part fine as well. But now that I think about it, about the live performance, the lead mentions dancing with the stars performance, so if you got sources or something, I'm sure you could expand and make a section for live performances. But if not, that's fine, it could work fine in the lead. After that, I think I'd be pretty good. I don't think there will be much things left for the actual reviewing. (LOL) xD ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 05:08, 31 December 2010 (UTC)
Now that that is all situated, I can review the actual content of the article. :)
I am passing the article. :) ΣПDiПG– STΛЯT 06:43, 1 January 2011 (UTC)