![]() | Fair Work Ombudsman v Quest South Perth is currently a Law good article nominee. Nominated by — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) at 23:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: 2015 judgment of the High Court of Australia |
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The result was: promoted by
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09:41, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by MaxnaCarta ( talk). Self-nominated at 22:50, 3 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Fair Work Ombudsman v Quest South Perth; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Nominator: MaxnaCarta ( talk · contribs) 23:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: KwanFlakes ( talk · contribs) 12:02, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
Picking up and beginning this review. Thank you for improving and expanding this article @
MaxnaCarta. Since I am still new to GA reviewing an experienced reviewer will also be taking a look. I should have some initial comments in the next 48 hours.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
12:02, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
Hi @MaxnaCarta, thanks again for your patience. See comments below. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
In the first paragraph of the Background section it is unclear whether the prohibition is contained in div 6 or s 357. While I can see from the legislation that all of div 6 (ss 357–359) relates to this, it could be good to clarify. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
”Protections, rights, and conditions”
is a little vague, especially after what appears to be a similar sentence in the lead. I feel that it could be worth going into a little more detail about the NES here.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
In the second paragraph of the Background section, {{tq|“with the benefit of this being that they would be no longer entitled to the protections, rights, and conditions of Australian labour laws” seems to say that they would be stripped of all protections as contractors, as opposed to most of them. Perhaps reword to clarify. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
Similar issue to the above with the line “without disclosing the disadvantages of losing their workplace rights”
in the next paragraph, though less concerned with this instance than the other. Still likely worth rewording or reworking somehow.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
I’m not sure how necessary or widespread definition markers like “(the Act)”
, “(the Ombudsman)”
, “(the Federal Court)”
, or “(High Court)”
are, especially as only one of each of these is referred to throughout.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
I had a concern about Bromberg J being referred to in text by the nickname “Mordy” rather than “Mordecai”, however I can see that that’s oddly the name of his page on the wiki, so I guess it doesn’t matter? Seems a bit odd to me. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
Could it be worth either renaming the section titled “Federal Court case” to something like “Federal Court case and first appeal” or “Federal Court cases”? Splitting the section into two seems like an option, but they would be very short. I feel that this is necessary to clearly delineate the case history in the article. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
I think it would be better for the FW Act be linked in the lead first, instead of the Background section. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
![]() | Fair Work Ombudsman v Quest South Perth is currently a Law good article nominee. Nominated by — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) at 23:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: 2015 judgment of the High Court of Australia |
![]() | A fact from Fair Work Ombudsman v Quest South Perth appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 29 January 2024 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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The result was: promoted by
Rjjiii
talk
09:41, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by MaxnaCarta ( talk). Self-nominated at 22:50, 3 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Fair Work Ombudsman v Quest South Perth; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Reviewing |
Nominator: MaxnaCarta ( talk · contribs) 23:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: KwanFlakes ( talk · contribs) 12:02, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
Picking up and beginning this review. Thank you for improving and expanding this article @
MaxnaCarta. Since I am still new to GA reviewing an experienced reviewer will also be taking a look. I should have some initial comments in the next 48 hours.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
12:02, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
Hi @MaxnaCarta, thanks again for your patience. See comments below. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
In the first paragraph of the Background section it is unclear whether the prohibition is contained in div 6 or s 357. While I can see from the legislation that all of div 6 (ss 357–359) relates to this, it could be good to clarify. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
”Protections, rights, and conditions”
is a little vague, especially after what appears to be a similar sentence in the lead. I feel that it could be worth going into a little more detail about the NES here.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
In the second paragraph of the Background section, {{tq|“with the benefit of this being that they would be no longer entitled to the protections, rights, and conditions of Australian labour laws” seems to say that they would be stripped of all protections as contractors, as opposed to most of them. Perhaps reword to clarify. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
Similar issue to the above with the line “without disclosing the disadvantages of losing their workplace rights”
in the next paragraph, though less concerned with this instance than the other. Still likely worth rewording or reworking somehow.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
I’m not sure how necessary or widespread definition markers like “(the Act)”
, “(the Ombudsman)”
, “(the Federal Court)”
, or “(High Court)”
are, especially as only one of each of these is referred to throughout.
KwanFlakes (
talk)
08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
I had a concern about Bromberg J being referred to in text by the nickname “Mordy” rather than “Mordecai”, however I can see that that’s oddly the name of his page on the wiki, so I guess it doesn’t matter? Seems a bit odd to me. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
Could it be worth either renaming the section titled “Federal Court case” to something like “Federal Court case and first appeal” or “Federal Court cases”? Splitting the section into two seems like an option, but they would be very short. I feel that this is necessary to clearly delineate the case history in the article. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
I think it would be better for the FW Act be linked in the lead first, instead of the Background section. KwanFlakes ( talk) 08:47, 18 July 2024 (UTC)