I applaud the sourcing of all the quoted material from Bear McCreary but am uncomfortable with the sheer amount of quotes in the "Music" section. Per
MOS:BLOCKQUOTE it would be better to place these quotes within a box-quote using
Template:Quote or to paraphrase some of the material.
Shearonink (
talk) 05:37, 8 February 2017 (UTC)reply
This Review is on hold pending the McCreary quotes in the Music section being adjusted.Shearonink (
talk) 05:37, 8 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review Shearonink! I have given the music section a c/e to paraphrase most of the quotes instead. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 05:55, 8 February 2017 (UTC)reply
I am giving the article some proofreading readthroughs to see if I missed anything of a GA concern. Pending completing my passthroughs, I think I will be able to finish up this Review within the next day or two.
Shearonink (
talk) 23:41, 9 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Nicely-written & factual, appreciate the non-puffery. I do wish some more images could be added but understand that it's Marvel and copyrights and trademarks and...well, yeah.
Shearonink (
talk) 02:33, 13 February 2017 (UTC)reply
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Adamstom.97: I think that a page move to something along the lines of "FZZT" (Agents of S.H.I.E.LD.) might be something to consider. I had forgotten that other episodes used this type of nomenclature until I went to place the article on the
Good articles Television page.
Shearonink (
talk) 02:44, 13 February 2017 (UTC)reply
We have used that for some other S.H.I.E.L.D. episodes, but it is generally only warranted if there is another article with the same title. And I will think about more images, but it is hard to find good ones to use that aren't copyrighted and stuff. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 04:21, 13 February 2017 (UTC)reply
I applaud the sourcing of all the quoted material from Bear McCreary but am uncomfortable with the sheer amount of quotes in the "Music" section. Per
MOS:BLOCKQUOTE it would be better to place these quotes within a box-quote using
Template:Quote or to paraphrase some of the material.
Shearonink (
talk) 05:37, 8 February 2017 (UTC)reply
This Review is on hold pending the McCreary quotes in the Music section being adjusted.Shearonink (
talk) 05:37, 8 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review Shearonink! I have given the music section a c/e to paraphrase most of the quotes instead. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 05:55, 8 February 2017 (UTC)reply
I am giving the article some proofreading readthroughs to see if I missed anything of a GA concern. Pending completing my passthroughs, I think I will be able to finish up this Review within the next day or two.
Shearonink (
talk) 23:41, 9 February 2017 (UTC)reply
Nicely-written & factual, appreciate the non-puffery. I do wish some more images could be added but understand that it's Marvel and copyrights and trademarks and...well, yeah.
Shearonink (
talk) 02:33, 13 February 2017 (UTC)reply
@
Adamstom.97: I think that a page move to something along the lines of "FZZT" (Agents of S.H.I.E.LD.) might be something to consider. I had forgotten that other episodes used this type of nomenclature until I went to place the article on the
Good articles Television page.
Shearonink (
talk) 02:44, 13 February 2017 (UTC)reply
We have used that for some other S.H.I.E.L.D. episodes, but it is generally only warranted if there is another article with the same title. And I will think about more images, but it is hard to find good ones to use that aren't copyrighted and stuff. -
adamstom97 (
talk) 04:21, 13 February 2017 (UTC)reply