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Quel mot? Quel verbe? Quel poème écrire?
La parole se peint D'un rouge-martyre La parole s'éternise... --- Moloïse Ou Le poème éternel --- D'une froideur incroyable L'exécrable Botha Et d'autres Pieter ingrats Étranglèrent le Poète - La corde se perchait Quand la tête haute Cracha bas Sur des gueules ignobles - " A Mort ! " cria Le Pieter bas Et mille Botha S'acharnèrent à serrer - Un homme est mort Une larme a coulé... Mais le poème est là Éternellement vivant L'arme dans les âmes - Et de ce cœur brisé Que la mère porte Coule amère LE SANG DU COMBAT
(Par Mustapha Benaïssa, "Entre joies et peines" pages 85-86, Édilivre, Paris, 2015 / www.edilivre.com/doc/726073 ) 41.99.251.241 ( talk) 09:25, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
Publié auparavant en 1996 par Mustapha Benaïssa, aux éditions Fennec, Algérie, sous le titre "Tribulations" Fisherold ( talk) 09:37, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
talk 19:29, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
5x expanded by Iamawesomeautomatic ( talk). Self-nominated at 00:13, 29 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Execution of Benjamin Moloise; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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All in all, meets all of the requirements, save for the QPQ. Please ping me once that is resolved and I will have no problem passing this.
JJonahJackalope (
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@ JJonahJackalope: Hi, I think you may have commented on the wrong article. Iamawesomeautomatic ( talk) 02:11, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet ( talk · contribs) 01:15, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Interesting one! First few quick points...
During the trial, the prosecution alleged that Moloise's motivation for killing Selepe was driven by revenge-- this is overwritten, "was driven by" isn't necessary.
I find I have very few comments on prose, though I'll give another quick check later. Will check the sources soon. Vaticidal prophet 01:15, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Just working through now.
he would later retract the statement during his trialdoesn't need 'would' ("he later retracted the statement during his trial"), nor does it need the link to 'trial'
Vaticidal prophet 20:51, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
Despite Jana's objections-- aren't people usually convicted of crimes despite the objections of their defense lawyer? That is, I'm not sure this is necessary rather than just going to "and then he was convicted". The paragraph already makes the problematic elements of that conviction clear.
While not all nations shared equal enthusiasm for the proposal-- any specific examples?
they'd be in meetings foreveruses a contraction, which is best to avoid -- the direct quote from the source of "we would be meeting all the time" can be used in quotemarks and gets the tone across just as well.
I don't find I have comments on the later sections. This is a strong article for which most of the issues are stylistic rather than underlying, and I hope to promote it soon. Vaticidal prophet 03:34, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
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fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
October 3, 2023. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that after
Benjamin Moloise's execution, the extremist group
Direct Action bombed two Paris companies linked to South Africa in protest? | ||||||||||||
Current status: Former featured article candidate, current good article |
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Quel mot? Quel verbe? Quel poème écrire?
La parole se peint D'un rouge-martyre La parole s'éternise... --- Moloïse Ou Le poème éternel --- D'une froideur incroyable L'exécrable Botha Et d'autres Pieter ingrats Étranglèrent le Poète - La corde se perchait Quand la tête haute Cracha bas Sur des gueules ignobles - " A Mort ! " cria Le Pieter bas Et mille Botha S'acharnèrent à serrer - Un homme est mort Une larme a coulé... Mais le poème est là Éternellement vivant L'arme dans les âmes - Et de ce cœur brisé Que la mère porte Coule amère LE SANG DU COMBAT
(Par Mustapha Benaïssa, "Entre joies et peines" pages 85-86, Édilivre, Paris, 2015 / www.edilivre.com/doc/726073 ) 41.99.251.241 ( talk) 09:25, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
Publié auparavant en 1996 par Mustapha Benaïssa, aux éditions Fennec, Algérie, sous le titre "Tribulations" Fisherold ( talk) 09:37, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
talk 19:29, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
5x expanded by Iamawesomeautomatic ( talk). Self-nominated at 00:13, 29 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Execution of Benjamin Moloise; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
All in all, meets all of the requirements, save for the QPQ. Please ping me once that is resolved and I will have no problem passing this.
JJonahJackalope (
talk) 01:46, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
@ JJonahJackalope: Hi, I think you may have commented on the wrong article. Iamawesomeautomatic ( talk) 02:11, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet ( talk · contribs) 01:15, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Interesting one! First few quick points...
During the trial, the prosecution alleged that Moloise's motivation for killing Selepe was driven by revenge-- this is overwritten, "was driven by" isn't necessary.
I find I have very few comments on prose, though I'll give another quick check later. Will check the sources soon. Vaticidal prophet 01:15, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Just working through now.
he would later retract the statement during his trialdoesn't need 'would' ("he later retracted the statement during his trial"), nor does it need the link to 'trial'
Vaticidal prophet 20:51, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
Despite Jana's objections-- aren't people usually convicted of crimes despite the objections of their defense lawyer? That is, I'm not sure this is necessary rather than just going to "and then he was convicted". The paragraph already makes the problematic elements of that conviction clear.
While not all nations shared equal enthusiasm for the proposal-- any specific examples?
they'd be in meetings foreveruses a contraction, which is best to avoid -- the direct quote from the source of "we would be meeting all the time" can be used in quotemarks and gets the tone across just as well.
I don't find I have comments on the later sections. This is a strong article for which most of the issues are stylistic rather than underlying, and I hope to promote it soon. Vaticidal prophet 03:34, 6 September 2023 (UTC)