Examples such as "It seems" and "For the advantage due to creation of genetic variation, there are three possible reasons this might happen" are not exactly stunning or enlightening.
There are large gaps between citations. Whole paragraphs and even sections are lacking citations. This is not acceptable, even for a "good article". I am familiar with the
citation requirements for scientific articles, however, this article presents a large quantity of information which should be cited.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Article will be placed on hold until issues can be addressed. If an editor does not at least express an interest in addressing these issues within seven days, the article will be delisted. --ErgoSum•
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trib 22:18, 30 May 2009 (UTC)reply
Looking at the lead, it needs to be condensed down to three or four paragraphs (currently stands at six). See
WP:LEAD for guidelines. --Happy editing!
Nehrams2020 (
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contrib) 22:52, 30 May 2009 (UTC)reply
Article has been delisted after seven day hold. --ErgoSum•
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trib 13:35, 6 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Examples such as "It seems" and "For the advantage due to creation of genetic variation, there are three possible reasons this might happen" are not exactly stunning or enlightening.
There are large gaps between citations. Whole paragraphs and even sections are lacking citations. This is not acceptable, even for a "good article". I am familiar with the
citation requirements for scientific articles, however, this article presents a large quantity of information which should be cited.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Article will be placed on hold until issues can be addressed. If an editor does not at least express an interest in addressing these issues within seven days, the article will be delisted. --ErgoSum•
talk•
trib 22:18, 30 May 2009 (UTC)reply
Looking at the lead, it needs to be condensed down to three or four paragraphs (currently stands at six). See
WP:LEAD for guidelines. --Happy editing!
Nehrams2020 (
talk •
contrib) 22:52, 30 May 2009 (UTC)reply
Article has been delisted after seven day hold. --ErgoSum•
talk•
trib 13:35, 6 June 2009 (UTC)reply