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This article covered the ad well and the video was quite interesting to watch. The article didn't have too many problems, and the above issues shouldn't take long to fix. I have left the article on hold for seven days for the issues to be addressed. If they are fixed in this time, I will pass the article. If not, the article may be failed and can be renominated at WP:GAN. If necessary to address the above issues, and progress is being made, an extension may be allowed. If you have any questions or when you are done, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Happy editing! -- Nehrams2020 ( talk) 05:47, 12 January 2008 (UTC)
Good job with addressing the above issues, so I have passed this article according to the requirements of the GA criteria. If you can get a free image that would be great, so best wishes in getting permission. I have worked with multiple film/actor articles, and I know how difficult it can be to get free images. Continue to improve the article, making sure that all new information is properly sourced and neutral. Also, see if there are any related WikiProject banners that can be added to this talk page.
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I ran out of space in my edit summary for the latest changes, which altered content submitted by User:66.28.244.34. I'll summarise them here:
All other content changes look like improvements to me, so I've left them as was :) 62.231.146.140 ( talk) - GeeJo not signed in
Website that is offered on the top right hand side of the page no longer works. Maybe it could be changed to link to the Dove Real Beauty Campaign Website or the "Real Beauty" section of Dove's website. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eleonor.thomas ( talk • contribs) 21:21, 5 May 2014 (UTC)
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What do I do when important sources are on an artist myspace blog, and wikipedia doesn't allow linking to myspace blogs?
I have reviewed this article according to the requirements of the GA criteria and have placed the article on hold until the following issues are addressed. As you address each issue, either strike through the statement/place a check mark next to the issue and state how you addressed it. If you disagree with a particular issue, state your rationale for doing so after the issue in question so a compromise can be reached.
This article covered the ad well and the video was quite interesting to watch. The article didn't have too many problems, and the above issues shouldn't take long to fix. I have left the article on hold for seven days for the issues to be addressed. If they are fixed in this time, I will pass the article. If not, the article may be failed and can be renominated at WP:GAN. If necessary to address the above issues, and progress is being made, an extension may be allowed. If you have any questions or when you are done, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Happy editing! -- Nehrams2020 ( talk) 05:47, 12 January 2008 (UTC)
Good job with addressing the above issues, so I have passed this article according to the requirements of the GA criteria. If you can get a free image that would be great, so best wishes in getting permission. I have worked with multiple film/actor articles, and I know how difficult it can be to get free images. Continue to improve the article, making sure that all new information is properly sourced and neutral. Also, see if there are any related WikiProject banners that can be added to this talk page.
Also, to anyone that is reading this review, please consider reviewing an article or two at WP:GAN to help with the very large backlog. Instructions can be found here. Each new reviewer that helps to review articles will help to reduce the time that articles wait to be reviewed. Keep up the good work, and I hope that you continue to bring articles up to Good Article status (these articles on the ad campaigns are interesting to read!). If anyone disagrees with this review, an alternate opinion can be sought at Good article reassessment. If you have any further questions about this review, let me know on my talk page and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I have updated the article history to reflect this review. Happy editing! -- Nehrams2020 ( talk) 22:29, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
I ran out of space in my edit summary for the latest changes, which altered content submitted by User:66.28.244.34. I'll summarise them here:
All other content changes look like improvements to me, so I've left them as was :) 62.231.146.140 ( talk) - GeeJo not signed in
Website that is offered on the top right hand side of the page no longer works. Maybe it could be changed to link to the Dove Real Beauty Campaign Website or the "Real Beauty" section of Dove's website. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eleonor.thomas ( talk • contribs) 21:21, 5 May 2014 (UTC)
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