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I think you did an excellent job on the details of your visual analysis of the vase. Some suggestions might be to add a brief blurb about the evolution of the function of an amphora (e.g. from just storage to a status symbol culminating in the use of it as a prize.) Also, maybe add a bit more detail about what the foot-race, as a competition, entailed (if such info is available). Minor points of clarification might be that it is the Athena Promachos, and where the Amphora was discovered. Maybe even create an internal link to black figure style at /info/en/?search=Black-figure_pottery so that a reader could easily check out what this includes. Acrodgers ( talk) 19:32, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
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Hi Giancarlo - this is a solid start! You've already received some useful comments from your peer-reviewer, and I offer a few suggestions of my own below.
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I think you did an excellent job on the details of your visual analysis of the vase. Some suggestions might be to add a brief blurb about the evolution of the function of an amphora (e.g. from just storage to a status symbol culminating in the use of it as a prize.) Also, maybe add a bit more detail about what the foot-race, as a competition, entailed (if such info is available). Minor points of clarification might be that it is the Athena Promachos, and where the Amphora was discovered. Maybe even create an internal link to black figure style at /info/en/?search=Black-figure_pottery so that a reader could easily check out what this includes. Acrodgers ( talk) 19:32, 5 November 2017 (UTC)
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
Garacanelli.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 20:56, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi Giancarlo - this is a solid start! You've already received some useful comments from your peer-reviewer, and I offer a few suggestions of my own below.