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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose ( talk · contribs) 00:00, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
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Early life and education
Little is known of her early life- no issues.
Activism
requiring her care- consider rewording, as I don't think it's true that Hamer's brother required her care.
Hamer was known for her pacifism, but struggled with her patriotic feelings, advocating that peace could not occur until Belgium was liberated- no issues.
They drove to Essen, where they were frisked to the skin and then walked two hours to reach Roosendaal in the Netherlands.- no issues. Source has "searched to the skin" and a similar construction about them walking, but IMO ther is not a problem, per WP:LIMITED.
Career
writing on diverse topics about art,- maybe something like "including" instead of "about"? (Also applies to the lead)
She published two books...- no issues.
Awards and honors
awarded the Victory and Commemoration Medal and the Plaque of Honor by the Red Cross- unfortunately my preview of the book doesn't include page 306 - if it gives a date when this was awarded, that detail could be added.
Death and legacy
At the time of her death, she was remembered for her writing, as well as her pacifism and war service- no issues.
See also / Selected works / Notes
Infobox and lead
Excellent work, SusunW (and Ipigott). Obviously a lot of work has gone into researching and writing this, and I have only the most modest of suggestions to make. I made a few minor formatting changes as it was quicker than listing them out. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 17:01, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose ( talk · contribs) 00:00, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
(Criteria marked
are unassessed)
Early life and education
Little is known of her early life- no issues.
Activism
requiring her care- consider rewording, as I don't think it's true that Hamer's brother required her care.
Hamer was known for her pacifism, but struggled with her patriotic feelings, advocating that peace could not occur until Belgium was liberated- no issues.
They drove to Essen, where they were frisked to the skin and then walked two hours to reach Roosendaal in the Netherlands.- no issues. Source has "searched to the skin" and a similar construction about them walking, but IMO ther is not a problem, per WP:LIMITED.
Career
writing on diverse topics about art,- maybe something like "including" instead of "about"? (Also applies to the lead)
She published two books...- no issues.
Awards and honors
awarded the Victory and Commemoration Medal and the Plaque of Honor by the Red Cross- unfortunately my preview of the book doesn't include page 306 - if it gives a date when this was awarded, that detail could be added.
Death and legacy
At the time of her death, she was remembered for her writing, as well as her pacifism and war service- no issues.
See also / Selected works / Notes
Infobox and lead
Excellent work, SusunW (and Ipigott). Obviously a lot of work has gone into researching and writing this, and I have only the most modest of suggestions to make. I made a few minor formatting changes as it was quicker than listing them out. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 17:01, 13 March 2023 (UTC)