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Kohlberg's Just Community approach deserves its own lemma, I think. Generally, I feel that pedagogical issues are underpresented in Wikipedia as in the entire Internet. Maybe this is a gender issue, I dunno.
This article requires some heavy editing to achieve some kind of balance and a degree encylopedia-ness (or whatever the word is ). We have a two-sentence lead to introduce the topic, we have a further two-sentences under the heading Basics that seems to say that relationships are central to Queer theory, then we have two whole screens of Contrasting Theories. What about a proper explanation of what an Ethical Relationship actually is? At the moment we have the un-sourced claim that people who employ the term study the relationship between mother and child, but they haven't actually said that the mother-child relationship is ethical, by definition, can be ethical, is ethical sometimes under certain circumstances, is mostly ethical most often, or what. All they said is that people who use the term ethical relationship study the mother child relationship. For example, some people who use the term Major Key study music. Does that tell you anything at all about what a mjor key is, or what music is? Clearly Not.
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Kohlberg's Just Community approach deserves its own lemma, I think. Generally, I feel that pedagogical issues are underpresented in Wikipedia as in the entire Internet. Maybe this is a gender issue, I dunno.
This article requires some heavy editing to achieve some kind of balance and a degree encylopedia-ness (or whatever the word is ). We have a two-sentence lead to introduce the topic, we have a further two-sentences under the heading Basics that seems to say that relationships are central to Queer theory, then we have two whole screens of Contrasting Theories. What about a proper explanation of what an Ethical Relationship actually is? At the moment we have the un-sourced claim that people who employ the term study the relationship between mother and child, but they haven't actually said that the mother-child relationship is ethical, by definition, can be ethical, is ethical sometimes under certain circumstances, is mostly ethical most often, or what. All they said is that people who use the term ethical relationship study the mother child relationship. For example, some people who use the term Major Key study music. Does that tell you anything at all about what a mjor key is, or what music is? Clearly Not.
Some suggestions for improvement: