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Reviewer: Carbrera ( talk · contribs) 08:48, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
The entire article could use some work re-wording. It tries to keep too formal and due to that, sounds fairly awkward at certain points. Anyway, on hold for seven days to allow for these changes. Good luck and thanks, @PING me when you're done. Cheers, Carbrera ( talk) 02:35, 29 June 2016 (UTC).
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Reviewer: Carbrera ( talk · contribs) 08:48, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
The entire article could use some work re-wording. It tries to keep too formal and due to that, sounds fairly awkward at certain points. Anyway, on hold for seven days to allow for these changes. Good luck and thanks, @PING me when you're done. Cheers, Carbrera ( talk) 02:35, 29 June 2016 (UTC).