Done. Added another link. Please see if this means the previous link can be removed. Thanks.
For his works to eliminate apartheid could be phrased better.
Done
4 Personal life
Link Turkish literature.
Done
5 Positions
Is this section needed? It seems to be a duplication of information provided elsewhere.
Ambivalent on retaining / removing it. I have seen articles have this view that gives a succinct timeline of roles / positions. If it is alright, would prefer we leave it. Please let me know if that is alright.
@
Ktin: I'm OK with it staying, but all the dates either need to have brackets, or have them removed. The section is imo in the wrong place, and should be included using a === level title with the Career section.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
07:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Changed to ref #7 now. Let me know if this needs additional clarifn.
N Worldcat names Reddy as the co-author of this book, but does not verify the text in the article ("[He] edited anthologies of Gandhi's influence on... ... America.") You need to find another reference.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
08:15, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
The link to the papers doesn’t seem to allow online access to them—am I correct? If so this link shouldn’t really be in this section (or amend it to saying “Information about…)
Reworded. Please see if this is better. Thanks.
My apologies for not being clearer, the website is only a record of his papers, and they cannot be downloaded. Your wording needs to reflect this, by saying something like ' Record details of the E.S. Reddy collection of papers held at
Yale University'.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
08:04, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
An interesting article to review. I've put it on hold for a week (until 18 March) to allow time for any comments to be addressed. Please discuss with me any queries you have.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
08:47, 10 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Amitchell125, Greetings! Many thanks for the detailed and very thoughtful set of notes. I will get to them and share updates. I am currently going through some busy times off-wiki / IRL. Please can I request some additional time for me to get back. i.e. beyond 18 March. Thanks.
Ktin (
talk)
01:42, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the very thoughtful comments and detailed review,
Amitchell125. I had some spare time and was able to get to this ahead of my own expectations. I have added my notes above for all the changes incorporated. While most of the feedback has been incorporated, there are a couple that I might need your assistance with. Please have a look and let me know of your thoughts at your convenience. Thanks again.
Ktin (
talk)
02:45, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
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Amitchell125 Thanks much for that very quick revert. I have taken a pass at addressing the remaining items. Please have a look at your convenience. If I have inadvertently missed anything, please let me know.
Ktin (
talk)
00:30, 18 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Done. Added another link. Please see if this means the previous link can be removed. Thanks.
For his works to eliminate apartheid could be phrased better.
Done
4 Personal life
Link Turkish literature.
Done
5 Positions
Is this section needed? It seems to be a duplication of information provided elsewhere.
Ambivalent on retaining / removing it. I have seen articles have this view that gives a succinct timeline of roles / positions. If it is alright, would prefer we leave it. Please let me know if that is alright.
@
Ktin: I'm OK with it staying, but all the dates either need to have brackets, or have them removed. The section is imo in the wrong place, and should be included using a === level title with the Career section.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
07:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Changed to ref #7 now. Let me know if this needs additional clarifn.
N Worldcat names Reddy as the co-author of this book, but does not verify the text in the article ("[He] edited anthologies of Gandhi's influence on... ... America.") You need to find another reference.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
08:15, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
The link to the papers doesn’t seem to allow online access to them—am I correct? If so this link shouldn’t really be in this section (or amend it to saying “Information about…)
Reworded. Please see if this is better. Thanks.
My apologies for not being clearer, the website is only a record of his papers, and they cannot be downloaded. Your wording needs to reflect this, by saying something like ' Record details of the E.S. Reddy collection of papers held at
Yale University'.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
08:04, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
An interesting article to review. I've put it on hold for a week (until 18 March) to allow time for any comments to be addressed. Please discuss with me any queries you have.
Amitchell125 (
talk)
08:47, 10 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Amitchell125, Greetings! Many thanks for the detailed and very thoughtful set of notes. I will get to them and share updates. I am currently going through some busy times off-wiki / IRL. Please can I request some additional time for me to get back. i.e. beyond 18 March. Thanks.
Ktin (
talk)
01:42, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the very thoughtful comments and detailed review,
Amitchell125. I had some spare time and was able to get to this ahead of my own expectations. I have added my notes above for all the changes incorporated. While most of the feedback has been incorporated, there are a couple that I might need your assistance with. Please have a look and let me know of your thoughts at your convenience. Thanks again.
Ktin (
talk)
02:45, 17 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Amitchell125 Thanks much for that very quick revert. I have taken a pass at addressing the remaining items. Please have a look at your convenience. If I have inadvertently missed anything, please let me know.
Ktin (
talk)
00:30, 18 March 2021 (UTC)reply