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In general I would have placed a link to the wikipedia page of Endoscopy as the main article. Filippo Ghisoni ( talk) 13:11, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
your article overall is fine.
Here my suggestions
Well done! Niranjan — Preceding undated comment added 16:17, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2022.
Careful revision of the text for syntactic correctness and lexical choices is recommended
-- BarettoDiArchitettura ( talk) 18:51, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
There are a wide range of applications for endoscopes. Is there any defensible reason why the title is used for just one of them? If not this article should be renamed Medical endoscope or Endoscope (medical) and the current title should cover the entire class of endoscopes. · · · Peter Southwood (talk): 19:22, 8 February 2023 (UTC)
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In general I would have placed a link to the wikipedia page of Endoscopy as the main article. Filippo Ghisoni ( talk) 13:11, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
your article overall is fine.
Here my suggestions
Well done! Niranjan — Preceding undated comment added 16:17, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2022.
Careful revision of the text for syntactic correctness and lexical choices is recommended
-- BarettoDiArchitettura ( talk) 18:51, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
There are a wide range of applications for endoscopes. Is there any defensible reason why the title is used for just one of them? If not this article should be renamed Medical endoscope or Endoscope (medical) and the current title should cover the entire class of endoscopes. · · · Peter Southwood (talk): 19:22, 8 February 2023 (UTC)