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Apologies- I don't know the protocol about deleting messy talk sections but this one is a hot mess. There are two opinion-based discussions about the topic rather than the article. This isn't the place for them. Are we able to just delete them? It's not a good look for the website to be honest. Mr Blumenthal ( talk) 20:41, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Hello, friends. I wrote this article back in 2010. This was before Carolyn Bryant Donham came out with her statements, so a lot has happened since I wrote it and retired from Wikipedia.
As a result, the article has lost cohesion which happens when a lot of editors add info. It needs a good copy edit. I'm asking if anyone is interested in getting it back into shape with me. If so, I'll start a sandbox and we can start there.
If not, I can try it myself but don't @ me with ya nasty comments when it's posted. I don't intend to watch it after I'm done so it will need to be watched by someone who has a regular presence here. That's easier to do when you know the source material.
I'll wait a few days for replies. Moni3 ( talk) 16:09, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
Carolyn Bryant is listed in the info box as "Accused," while I'm sure she could be accused of several things, or unless there is some other definition of accused I am unaware of, this isn't accurate. At the moment I can't think of the correct term, but thought I'd drop a note of anyone wants to fix it. Dmwilliams1979 ( talk) 18:49, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
"Emmett Till was born to Mamie Carthan and Louis Till on July 25, 1941, in Chicago." My understanding has always been that Till's parents were married at the time of his birth. The sentence in the article implies that they were not married. If they were married, the sentence should read, Emmett Till was born to Mamie and Louis Till on July 25, 1941, in Chicago. 2603:7000:B23D:C116:F9D0:B547:E089:EF39 ( talk) 21:15, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
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Apologies- I don't know the protocol about deleting messy talk sections but this one is a hot mess. There are two opinion-based discussions about the topic rather than the article. This isn't the place for them. Are we able to just delete them? It's not a good look for the website to be honest. Mr Blumenthal ( talk) 20:41, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Hello, friends. I wrote this article back in 2010. This was before Carolyn Bryant Donham came out with her statements, so a lot has happened since I wrote it and retired from Wikipedia.
As a result, the article has lost cohesion which happens when a lot of editors add info. It needs a good copy edit. I'm asking if anyone is interested in getting it back into shape with me. If so, I'll start a sandbox and we can start there.
If not, I can try it myself but don't @ me with ya nasty comments when it's posted. I don't intend to watch it after I'm done so it will need to be watched by someone who has a regular presence here. That's easier to do when you know the source material.
I'll wait a few days for replies. Moni3 ( talk) 16:09, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
Carolyn Bryant is listed in the info box as "Accused," while I'm sure she could be accused of several things, or unless there is some other definition of accused I am unaware of, this isn't accurate. At the moment I can't think of the correct term, but thought I'd drop a note of anyone wants to fix it. Dmwilliams1979 ( talk) 18:49, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
"Emmett Till was born to Mamie Carthan and Louis Till on July 25, 1941, in Chicago." My understanding has always been that Till's parents were married at the time of his birth. The sentence in the article implies that they were not married. If they were married, the sentence should read, Emmett Till was born to Mamie and Louis Till on July 25, 1941, in Chicago. 2603:7000:B23D:C116:F9D0:B547:E089:EF39 ( talk) 21:15, 19 May 2024 (UTC)