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Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 05:01, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:01, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
Nothing too major; I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:10, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
One more minor issue: "In four MLB seasons, Stricklett went 35–51" I think this sentence could go at the end of the last mlb paragraph, since he played beyond that. I'd also prefer a bit more in the way of expansion before passing this. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:06, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 05:01, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:01, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
Nothing too major; I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:10, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
One more minor issue: "In four MLB seasons, Stricklett went 35–51" I think this sentence could go at the end of the last mlb paragraph, since he played beyond that. I'd also prefer a bit more in the way of expansion before passing this. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:06, 26 June 2012 (UTC)