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This article has been reviewed for COI prior to being promoted to mainspace, & found good. [1] -- Tagishsimon ( talk) 23:29, 16 November 2019 (UTC) reply

Requested updates

My name is Elizabeth Rowe and I am the subject of the article. I would like to request a few changes related to my departure from the Boston Symphony Group to focus on my leadership coaching business, as reported here. Pinging @ Tagishsimon:, who approved the article originally from Articles for Creation. Below are my proposed changes.

1. Lead

is an American flutist
+
is an American flutist and leadership coach
known for being the principal flutist of the Boston Symphony Orchestra
+
known for being the principal flutist of the Boston Symphony Orchestra from 2004 to 2024


2. Bottom of Career Section

Retirement
+
Leadership Coaching
Explanation: The "Retirement" section title makes it sound like I am retiring from work altogether, rather than just resigning from one job to focus on another.
In April 2024, she announced plans to pursue a career in leadership coaching
+
, in order to focus on her work as a leadership coach.
Explanation: A couple issues. While the cited article was published in April 2024, it does not say this is when I announced I would start a career in leadership coaching. To the contrary, the cited article infers I've had a leadership coaching business for years ("Her track toward leadership coaching began with her own flute students at Tanglewood and at New England Conservatory, where she maintained a small studio until a few years ago.")


3. External Links

[https://iamelizabethrowe.com Personal website]
+
[https://iamelizabethrowe.com Official Website]
References
  1. ^ Madonna, A.Z. (April 4, 2024). "Flutist Elizabeth Rowe landed the dream job of a lifetime at 29. At 49, she's walking away". BostonGlobe.com. Retrieved April 26, 2024.
  2. ^ Allen, David (August 15, 2023). "At Tanglewood, the Boston Symphony Displays Its Heritage and Uncertain Future". The New York Times. Retrieved May 15, 2024.

Roweflute ( talk) 18:08, 21 May 2024 (UTC) reply

 Done, although maybe the first paragraph should mention that you've moved from playing in the orchestra to coaching? I'm unsure of how to word that now so I've just edited it as asked, but perhaps another editor can make it a bit clearer in the future. Jabster28 ( talk) 14:54, 29 June 2024 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

COI

This article has been reviewed for COI prior to being promoted to mainspace, & found good. [1] -- Tagishsimon ( talk) 23:29, 16 November 2019 (UTC) reply

Requested updates

My name is Elizabeth Rowe and I am the subject of the article. I would like to request a few changes related to my departure from the Boston Symphony Group to focus on my leadership coaching business, as reported here. Pinging @ Tagishsimon:, who approved the article originally from Articles for Creation. Below are my proposed changes.

1. Lead

is an American flutist
+
is an American flutist and leadership coach
known for being the principal flutist of the Boston Symphony Orchestra
+
known for being the principal flutist of the Boston Symphony Orchestra from 2004 to 2024


2. Bottom of Career Section

Retirement
+
Leadership Coaching
Explanation: The "Retirement" section title makes it sound like I am retiring from work altogether, rather than just resigning from one job to focus on another.
In April 2024, she announced plans to pursue a career in leadership coaching
+
, in order to focus on her work as a leadership coach.
Explanation: A couple issues. While the cited article was published in April 2024, it does not say this is when I announced I would start a career in leadership coaching. To the contrary, the cited article infers I've had a leadership coaching business for years ("Her track toward leadership coaching began with her own flute students at Tanglewood and at New England Conservatory, where she maintained a small studio until a few years ago.")


3. External Links

[https://iamelizabethrowe.com Personal website]
+
[https://iamelizabethrowe.com Official Website]
References
  1. ^ Madonna, A.Z. (April 4, 2024). "Flutist Elizabeth Rowe landed the dream job of a lifetime at 29. At 49, she's walking away". BostonGlobe.com. Retrieved April 26, 2024.
  2. ^ Allen, David (August 15, 2023). "At Tanglewood, the Boston Symphony Displays Its Heritage and Uncertain Future". The New York Times. Retrieved May 15, 2024.

Roweflute ( talk) 18:08, 21 May 2024 (UTC) reply

 Done, although maybe the first paragraph should mention that you've moved from playing in the orchestra to coaching? I'm unsure of how to word that now so I've just edited it as asked, but perhaps another editor can make it a bit clearer in the future. Jabster28 ( talk) 14:54, 29 June 2024 (UTC) reply

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