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Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 02:31, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
I'll give reviewing this a shot. First thing I noticed on a skim is that the lead definitely needs expansion, since right now it hardly mentions anything in the article.
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02:31, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
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Elgato is a brand of consumer technology products. The manufacturer, also called Elgato, was founded in 1992 by Markus Fest and is headquartered in Munich, Germany. [1] Elgato is best-known for a line of video-recording products called EyeTV, which records video from over-the-air antenna's, satellite TV, or mobile devices. The first EyeTV product was introduced in November 2002. More recently, it introduced a line of "smart" products, such as a key fab that track's the user's distance from their car or purse and provides notifications to help them find it. In 2014 it introduced a home monitoring system called Eve, which provides alerts to users regarding things like air pressure, temperature and water use, in their home. Elgato also developed light bulbs that can respond to programming on a mobile device and respond to commands over Bluetooth and it produces two thunderbolt products: a dock for macbooks and an external hard drive. |
I'll put the article on hold and will do another read-through once the above is addressed and once you add the new sources. Wizardman 00:00, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 02:31, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
I'll give reviewing this a shot. First thing I noticed on a skim is that the lead definitely needs expansion, since right now it hardly mentions anything in the article.
Wizardman
02:31, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
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Elgato is a brand of consumer technology products. The manufacturer, also called Elgato, was founded in 1992 by Markus Fest and is headquartered in Munich, Germany. [1] Elgato is best-known for a line of video-recording products called EyeTV, which records video from over-the-air antenna's, satellite TV, or mobile devices. The first EyeTV product was introduced in November 2002. More recently, it introduced a line of "smart" products, such as a key fab that track's the user's distance from their car or purse and provides notifications to help them find it. In 2014 it introduced a home monitoring system called Eve, which provides alerts to users regarding things like air pressure, temperature and water use, in their home. Elgato also developed light bulbs that can respond to programming on a mobile device and respond to commands over Bluetooth and it produces two thunderbolt products: a dock for macbooks and an external hard drive. |
I'll put the article on hold and will do another read-through once the above is addressed and once you add the new sources. Wizardman 00:00, 24 February 2015 (UTC)