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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 15:30, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
Mine, review to follow soon. I'm a chess player, but not a mathematician. J Milburn ( talk) 15:30, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
Ok, I'm afraid that this article has quite a long way to go before it's ready for good article status. The following are the pieces that you need to work on:
As this really needs to be completely rewritten to bring it in line with cited sources and place it in a more logical order, it doesn't really seem worth me going into any prose issues (though the article has clearly been written by several people- it lacks any kind of unity). As such, I'm going to have to fail the article at this point, as it needs significant work. I hope this is something you're willing to do- you may be able to find people willing to help at Wikipedia:WikiProject Mathematics or Wikipedia:WikiProject Chess. Good luck! J Milburn ( talk) 15:56, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: J Milburn ( talk · contribs) 15:30, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
Mine, review to follow soon. I'm a chess player, but not a mathematician. J Milburn ( talk) 15:30, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
Ok, I'm afraid that this article has quite a long way to go before it's ready for good article status. The following are the pieces that you need to work on:
As this really needs to be completely rewritten to bring it in line with cited sources and place it in a more logical order, it doesn't really seem worth me going into any prose issues (though the article has clearly been written by several people- it lacks any kind of unity). As such, I'm going to have to fail the article at this point, as it needs significant work. I hope this is something you're willing to do- you may be able to find people willing to help at Wikipedia:WikiProject Mathematics or Wikipedia:WikiProject Chess. Good luck! J Milburn ( talk) 15:56, 13 April 2012 (UTC)