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Section on Islamic-NAZI cooperation has serious NPOV issues. Sources provided are articles from non-neutral sources that rely on hearsay. No solid reference is provided, and the whole wording needs to be rewritten from the bottom up if it is to be NPOV. Deleted.
Very little of this article—basically only the fleet section—has to do with Egypt as a country. It is mainly about the fighting in Egypt and is mostly redundant to the article about the Western Desert Campaign. — Srnec ( talk) 13:43, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
Intelligence from Bletchly Park is credited with the sinking of a lot of Axis shipping destined for Rommell. Should a note be made of this here ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 31.68.68.15 ( talk) 23:13, 18 September 2015 (UTC)
What a shitty article, I came here trying to find out some facts and nothing is sourced and its terribly written. No wonder why people don't take Wikipedia seriously. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.66.126.143 ( talk) 04:02, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
"the First Battle of El Alamein was lost by Rommel because he was suffering from the eternal curse of the desert war, and long supply lines."
Could someone explain the enigmatic figure of speech about 'the eternal curse' - was it logistical, weather or health related? It seems like a direct quotation from another writer. Cloptonson ( talk) 10:22, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
I want it set up like this:
Poltiics:
Summary of politics before World War Two
(Then I break it up by prime ministers with The Abdeen Palace Inciddent in between)
Military:
Talk about Aziz Al-masri and Sadat's attempt at trying to collaborate with the Nazis
Talk about what the military was up to during the war (shooting down planes over Alexandria)
Sudan's help during the liberation of Ethiopia
Public Sentiment (use Israel Gershoni's work):
Liberals
Muslim Brotherhood
Young Egypt
Socialists
Thoughts?
Drsmartypants(Smarty M.D) (
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14:15, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
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Section on Islamic-NAZI cooperation has serious NPOV issues. Sources provided are articles from non-neutral sources that rely on hearsay. No solid reference is provided, and the whole wording needs to be rewritten from the bottom up if it is to be NPOV. Deleted.
Very little of this article—basically only the fleet section—has to do with Egypt as a country. It is mainly about the fighting in Egypt and is mostly redundant to the article about the Western Desert Campaign. — Srnec ( talk) 13:43, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
Intelligence from Bletchly Park is credited with the sinking of a lot of Axis shipping destined for Rommell. Should a note be made of this here ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 31.68.68.15 ( talk) 23:13, 18 September 2015 (UTC)
What a shitty article, I came here trying to find out some facts and nothing is sourced and its terribly written. No wonder why people don't take Wikipedia seriously. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.66.126.143 ( talk) 04:02, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
"the First Battle of El Alamein was lost by Rommel because he was suffering from the eternal curse of the desert war, and long supply lines."
Could someone explain the enigmatic figure of speech about 'the eternal curse' - was it logistical, weather or health related? It seems like a direct quotation from another writer. Cloptonson ( talk) 10:22, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
I want it set up like this:
Poltiics:
Summary of politics before World War Two
(Then I break it up by prime ministers with The Abdeen Palace Inciddent in between)
Military:
Talk about Aziz Al-masri and Sadat's attempt at trying to collaborate with the Nazis
Talk about what the military was up to during the war (shooting down planes over Alexandria)
Sudan's help during the liberation of Ethiopia
Public Sentiment (use Israel Gershoni's work):
Liberals
Muslim Brotherhood
Young Egypt
Socialists
Thoughts?
Drsmartypants(Smarty M.D) (
talk)
14:15, 13 April 2023 (UTC)