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Considering consolidating the later life and postwar career sections, these are both rather short sections.
I understand where you are coming from as they are both short sections but I prefer to keep them that way since they are quite logically fall into military life and civilian life.
Zawed (
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08:03, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply
External link is about Alan Deere, doesn't look relevant
That's embarrassing - I cut and pasted from the Alan Deere article so as to keep the language of the description consistent. I changed the name but forgot to update the link! Fixed now.
Zawed (
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08:03, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply
Thanks for taking the time to review this article. I have responded to your points above, I hope they are satisfactory. Cheers,
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08:03, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply
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Considering consolidating the later life and postwar career sections, these are both rather short sections.
I understand where you are coming from as they are both short sections but I prefer to keep them that way since they are quite logically fall into military life and civilian life.
Zawed (
talk)
08:03, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply
External link is about Alan Deere, doesn't look relevant
That's embarrassing - I cut and pasted from the Alan Deere article so as to keep the language of the description consistent. I changed the name but forgot to update the link! Fixed now.
Zawed (
talk)
08:03, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply
Thanks for taking the time to review this article. I have responded to your points above, I hope they are satisfactory. Cheers,
Zawed (
talk)
08:03, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply