I'd like to jump in here. This is a rather good article, but I spotted a few issues:
Are there any cites for the "Role in Ed, Edd n Eddy" section and the first paragraph of "Personality"? Maybe you could use episode specific citations, kind of like what's done
here under "Character Arc".
"...order to purchase their favourite favorite confectionery; jawbreakers...." Kill repeated word
"Though he comes up with the scams by himself, he does not participate in the construction, meaning Edd and Ed must build by themselves, though Ed often accidentally destroys it." -> "Though he comes up with the scams by himself, he does not participate in the construction, meaning Edd and Ed must build by themselves, though Ed often accidentally destroys them."
Hi, Quon! I've taken care of the second and third issue you stated - However, really, if I'd cite episode speficic sources, I'd cite the whole series! He basically comes up with scams, is selfish, brags about his looks etc. in nearly every episode... There's no specific episode that reveals how selfish he is, how he always tries to get jawbreakers etc. etc. :) All the Best, --Khanassassin☪19:29, 15 June 2012 (UTC)reply
I'd like to jump in here. This is a rather good article, but I spotted a few issues:
Are there any cites for the "Role in Ed, Edd n Eddy" section and the first paragraph of "Personality"? Maybe you could use episode specific citations, kind of like what's done
here under "Character Arc".
"...order to purchase their favourite favorite confectionery; jawbreakers...." Kill repeated word
"Though he comes up with the scams by himself, he does not participate in the construction, meaning Edd and Ed must build by themselves, though Ed often accidentally destroys it." -> "Though he comes up with the scams by himself, he does not participate in the construction, meaning Edd and Ed must build by themselves, though Ed often accidentally destroys them."
Hi, Quon! I've taken care of the second and third issue you stated - However, really, if I'd cite episode speficic sources, I'd cite the whole series! He basically comes up with scams, is selfish, brags about his looks etc. in nearly every episode... There's no specific episode that reveals how selfish he is, how he always tries to get jawbreakers etc. etc. :) All the Best, --Khanassassin☪19:29, 15 June 2012 (UTC)reply