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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague ( talk · contribs) 03:34, 27 June 2013 (UTC) This seems an excellent article. Review should proceed in a few days. QatarStarsLeague ( talk) 03:34, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
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You may want to consider wikilinking farmoun and baile.
"...difficult terrain, poor roads and methods of transport..." Did you mean to place a word like scarce in front of methods?
"... necessitating the shipping of large quantities of grain from the Baltic." It is obvious to any reader that no grain is produced on the Baltic Sea. Even still, the wording is unusual to me. Maybe you could alter to identify as "the Baltic region", or identify the
Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth as a major supplier?
"...1584-8..." Do you mean 1584-88, or did you forget to place the second digit?
"...use Flemings to teach new techniques..." Are you referring to the inhabitants of Flanders?
"...bringing a Venetian..." There is no confusion as to the provenance of a Venetian, but you still might want to wikilink to the Republic of Venice.
"The invasions of the 1640s..." Invasions by what polity?
Please wikilink Lothians and Ayrshire.
Excellent article, with which I have identified few problems. Once they are addressed and allayed, the article will pass. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague ( talk) 22:47, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague ( talk · contribs) 03:34, 27 June 2013 (UTC) This seems an excellent article. Review should proceed in a few days. QatarStarsLeague ( talk) 03:34, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
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You may want to consider wikilinking farmoun and baile.
"...difficult terrain, poor roads and methods of transport..." Did you mean to place a word like scarce in front of methods?
"... necessitating the shipping of large quantities of grain from the Baltic." It is obvious to any reader that no grain is produced on the Baltic Sea. Even still, the wording is unusual to me. Maybe you could alter to identify as "the Baltic region", or identify the
Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth as a major supplier?
"...1584-8..." Do you mean 1584-88, or did you forget to place the second digit?
"...use Flemings to teach new techniques..." Are you referring to the inhabitants of Flanders?
"...bringing a Venetian..." There is no confusion as to the provenance of a Venetian, but you still might want to wikilink to the Republic of Venice.
"The invasions of the 1640s..." Invasions by what polity?
Please wikilink Lothians and Ayrshire.
Excellent article, with which I have identified few problems. Once they are addressed and allayed, the article will pass. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague ( talk) 22:47, 30 June 2013 (UTC)