GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: Go Phightins! ( talk · contribs) 01:30, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
OK, here are some thoughts. The article is short and not particularly comprehensive; Joseph Webb House, for example, is illustrated with pictures (which it seems one should be able to find/take of this building), it gives a comprehensive history (this article has several gaps in the history, most notably from the 1880s to 1970s), and it centers on the building itself, rather than the historical events that took place there (e.g., this article's third paragraph in the history section belongs in a different article). Also, expound on who Ebenezer Avery was. Finally, the article relies heavily upon The Day; while other sources may not exist, it is a consideration. Right now, this article does not meet the GA criteria, and as such, I cannot pass it at this time. I will, however, leave the review open until the weekend in case you can update it. Go Phightins ! 01:30, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
Anything else needed, reviewer? Seems like everyone disappeared here. Wizardman 03:23, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: Go Phightins! ( talk · contribs) 01:30, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
OK, here are some thoughts. The article is short and not particularly comprehensive; Joseph Webb House, for example, is illustrated with pictures (which it seems one should be able to find/take of this building), it gives a comprehensive history (this article has several gaps in the history, most notably from the 1880s to 1970s), and it centers on the building itself, rather than the historical events that took place there (e.g., this article's third paragraph in the history section belongs in a different article). Also, expound on who Ebenezer Avery was. Finally, the article relies heavily upon The Day; while other sources may not exist, it is a consideration. Right now, this article does not meet the GA criteria, and as such, I cannot pass it at this time. I will, however, leave the review open until the weekend in case you can update it. Go Phightins ! 01:30, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
Anything else needed, reviewer? Seems like everyone disappeared here. Wizardman 03:23, 6 July 2014 (UTC)