Comments I will review this with complete disregard to the bleak standards applied by GA, but with fairness and an eye on this being a featured article, which it is easily within reach. Feel free to ignore the nit-picky comments, but please consider that they are provided in good faith.
" proposed in 1963. In 1968, the" repetitive.
Removed repetition.
"n the late 1990s, and the project received federal funding in 2006, and construction commenced in 2007." one too many run-on clauses.
Fixed
"Sunnyside" is piped to a redirect.
Fixed, though redirects are not too problematic.
" its multiple delays, its high cost, and its bloated scope. Various delays have increased the cost " a bit clunky and repetitive.
Fixed
"63rd St. Subway" is piped to a redirect.
Fixed
"being constructed" perhaps "during construction" is better.
Done
"Park Avenue" is piped to a redirect.
Fixed
"There would be two" prior to this it was all "there will be..." so I'm not sure why this sudden change of tone? Seems odd, and there are several examples of this.
Fixed. Thanks for pointing this out. I tried to change "will" (present tense) to "would" (past tense) so it wouldn't sound outdated after a while.
epicgenius (
talk)
"weekday.[14][10][15] " would order references numerically.
Comments I will review this with complete disregard to the bleak standards applied by GA, but with fairness and an eye on this being a featured article, which it is easily within reach. Feel free to ignore the nit-picky comments, but please consider that they are provided in good faith.
" proposed in 1963. In 1968, the" repetitive.
Removed repetition.
"n the late 1990s, and the project received federal funding in 2006, and construction commenced in 2007." one too many run-on clauses.
Fixed
"Sunnyside" is piped to a redirect.
Fixed, though redirects are not too problematic.
" its multiple delays, its high cost, and its bloated scope. Various delays have increased the cost " a bit clunky and repetitive.
Fixed
"63rd St. Subway" is piped to a redirect.
Fixed
"being constructed" perhaps "during construction" is better.
Done
"Park Avenue" is piped to a redirect.
Fixed
"There would be two" prior to this it was all "there will be..." so I'm not sure why this sudden change of tone? Seems odd, and there are several examples of this.
Fixed. Thanks for pointing this out. I tried to change "will" (present tense) to "would" (past tense) so it wouldn't sound outdated after a while.
epicgenius (
talk)
"weekday.[14][10][15] " would order references numerically.