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The last part of the lede - "which has helped transform one of the nation's worst public housing projects into a thriving community.[5]" sounds like advertisement and doesn't directly pertain to the East Lake Golf Club. Would it be appropriate to remove this sentence, since it already links to the East Lake Foundation which has this information in it? ChunyangD ( talk) 04:10, 24 September 2018 (UTC)
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The last part of the lede - "which has helped transform one of the nation's worst public housing projects into a thriving community.[5]" sounds like advertisement and doesn't directly pertain to the East Lake Golf Club. Would it be appropriate to remove this sentence, since it already links to the East Lake Foundation which has this information in it? ChunyangD ( talk) 04:10, 24 September 2018 (UTC)