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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 22:11, 30 October 2015 (UTC) reply


I feel horrible for the backlog here. I'll finish this review soon JAG UAR  22:11, 30 October 2015 (UTC) reply

Initial comments

  • "He composed it in Leipzig" - would this sound better as He composed the chorale cantata in Leipzig as per usual Bach articles or am I wrong?
  • "(J.J. concerto for the 13th a. Trinity, J.J. being short for Jesu juva (Jesus help)" - I didn't understand this very well. Perhaps you could remove "being short for Jesu juva (Jesus help)" and add it in a note next to "J.J."?
  • "A short secco recitative for bass, "So muß es sein! " (So it must be! ), summarizes the ideas" - does this article use British or American spelling? It's just that I've always seen Bach articles use British spelling!
  • "The keys and time signatures are taken from the Bach scholar Alfred Dürr, using the symbol for common time (4/4)" - what does "(4/4)" mean here?

References

Close - promoted

Out of all my 334 reviews so far, this is my shortest one. I could honestly find nothing that goes against the GA criteria and am obliged to pass it outright! Well done. Addressing the comments are optional, but I realise that I could be mistaken in a couple of them (such as my suggestion for the lead and British spelling) JAG UAR  22:33, 30 October 2015 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 22:11, 30 October 2015 (UTC) reply


I feel horrible for the backlog here. I'll finish this review soon JAG UAR  22:11, 30 October 2015 (UTC) reply

Initial comments

  • "He composed it in Leipzig" - would this sound better as He composed the chorale cantata in Leipzig as per usual Bach articles or am I wrong?
  • "(J.J. concerto for the 13th a. Trinity, J.J. being short for Jesu juva (Jesus help)" - I didn't understand this very well. Perhaps you could remove "being short for Jesu juva (Jesus help)" and add it in a note next to "J.J."?
  • "A short secco recitative for bass, "So muß es sein! " (So it must be! ), summarizes the ideas" - does this article use British or American spelling? It's just that I've always seen Bach articles use British spelling!
  • "The keys and time signatures are taken from the Bach scholar Alfred Dürr, using the symbol for common time (4/4)" - what does "(4/4)" mean here?

References

Close - promoted

Out of all my 334 reviews so far, this is my shortest one. I could honestly find nothing that goes against the GA criteria and am obliged to pass it outright! Well done. Addressing the comments are optional, but I realise that I could be mistaken in a couple of them (such as my suggestion for the lead and British spelling) JAG UAR  22:33, 30 October 2015 (UTC) reply


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