Information in body of article needed to support that it was released on "Windows 95" platform
Source needed to verify ratings of "ELSPA" and "USK"
Lead
No issues
Story
Wiki-link "Dystopian"
Gameplay
No issues
Development
Move this section to the top of the article as it will make more sense on how it was developed
Reception
If "Adventure Gamers" had no score or review, please remove it from the review scores table
References
General note: Do not italicize sources that are not publications. Please move them to the publisher section for proper formatting. Here are some examples of this:
Reference 1 → "MobyGames" is not a written publication and should not be italicized
References 2-4 → "GameSpot" should not be italicized
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me)19:07, 15 July 2012 (UTC)reply
About the development section, I'd gone back and forth on it. Normally, I've seen it below plot and gameplay sections, but I felt like it was better in front, so glad to see someone else felt the same way. I believe I have addressed all the other issues. Thanks for the review! —
Torchiesttalkedits19:40, 15 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Nice job on responding so quickly! Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Keep up the good work!
Rp0211(talk2me)19:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Information in body of article needed to support that it was released on "Windows 95" platform
Source needed to verify ratings of "ELSPA" and "USK"
Lead
No issues
Story
Wiki-link "Dystopian"
Gameplay
No issues
Development
Move this section to the top of the article as it will make more sense on how it was developed
Reception
If "Adventure Gamers" had no score or review, please remove it from the review scores table
References
General note: Do not italicize sources that are not publications. Please move them to the publisher section for proper formatting. Here are some examples of this:
Reference 1 → "MobyGames" is not a written publication and should not be italicized
References 2-4 → "GameSpot" should not be italicized
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me)19:07, 15 July 2012 (UTC)reply
About the development section, I'd gone back and forth on it. Normally, I've seen it below plot and gameplay sections, but I felt like it was better in front, so glad to see someone else felt the same way. I believe I have addressed all the other issues. Thanks for the review! —
Torchiesttalkedits19:40, 15 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Nice job on responding so quickly! Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Keep up the good work!
Rp0211(talk2me)19:57, 15 July 2012 (UTC)reply