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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 18:28, 14 January 2017 (UTC) reply

I'll start this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 18:28, 14 January 2017 (UTC) reply

• No DABs, external links OK
• images appropriately licensed
• Karabisianoi however proved commas before and after "however"
• which with minor alterations survived commas after which and alterations
• Need to use MOS:CIRCA for approximate dates.
• Nicely done.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 00:16, 16 January 2017 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the time and the corrections, Sturmvogel 66! I've fixed the points you raised. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 18:11, 16 January 2017 (UTC) reply