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Reviewer: Ankit Maity ( talk · contribs) 06:21, 10 August 2013 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a ( major aspects): b ( focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Short sections and paragraphs are discouraged. In your case, it's the "Personal" and "Death" section. (GA criteria)
  • I worked a bit on that. diff Disavian ( talk) 02:10, 12 August 2013 (UTC) reply
• The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article. (GA criteria)
  • I worked to make it better summarize the article. If it's missing anything obvious, let me knowaye diff Disavian ( talk) 03:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC) reply
• There should not be anything in the lead not mentioned in the rest of the article. (GA criteria)
  • As far as I can tell, everything in the lead is contained in the article. Let me know if I'm missing something specific. Disavian ( talk) 03:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC) reply
• Biographies require {{ Persondata}}.
  • The persondata template is present and has data. Disavian ( talk) 02:19, 12 August 2013 (UTC) reply

The review is thus on hold. -- Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 07:47, 10 August 2013 (UTC) reply

Thank you for reviewing the article. :) I'll see what I can do... Disavian ( talk) 02:10, 12 August 2013 (UTC) reply

Complete the task. Then, passed. -- Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 09:12, 17 August 2013 (UTC) reply

 Done -- Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 12:32, 2 September 2013 (UTC) reply