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Reviewer: Courcelles ( talk · contribs) 16:31, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- I'll take this one on. Courcelles ( talk) 16:31, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Anything available about his life outside of footy? Anything at all?
- Prose needs a thorough copyedit, I recommend a request to the GOCE, it reads like a not-quite native speaker wrote the article.
- If he's made that many appearances with the Dutch U-19 team, they need to be covered in prose.
- I'm afraid at the moment I think the prose is just too rough for GA, and there are gaps in the coverage. Keep working on it, and it'll get there soon! Courcelles ( talk) 16:47, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Courcelles ( talk · contribs) 16:31, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- I'll take this one on. Courcelles ( talk) 16:31, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Anything available about his life outside of footy? Anything at all?
- Prose needs a thorough copyedit, I recommend a request to the GOCE, it reads like a not-quite native speaker wrote the article.
- If he's made that many appearances with the Dutch U-19 team, they need to be covered in prose.
- I'm afraid at the moment I think the prose is just too rough for GA, and there are gaps in the coverage. Keep working on it, and it'll get there soon! Courcelles ( talk) 16:47, 23 April 2018 (UTC)