Thanks for taking the review, and for your usual careful work reviewing citations. I'll go marking your requests as done, or providing further commentary as we go through the process.--GDuwenHoller!21:14, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Move Thomas Moore to after P. F. Kluge with {{Based on|"The Boys in the Bank"|P. F. Kluge and Thomas Moore}} since they both wrote the article.
Done
Also, is his name Thomas Moore or Thomas Mooreen (as seen in #Pre-production)?
Fixed
The poster usually serves as a source for the infobox, but
Victor J. Kemper isn't mentioned so he needs a reference.
Kemper is mentioned a couple of times throughout the article: in the Production, Reception and Legacy sections. The story by Kluge and Moore is not mentioned in the poster either, but we have the mentions along the article.--GDuwenHoller!20:45, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Running time needs a reference.
Done
It has already been established that the film was American so US$ isn't needed in the infobox.
Fixed
"US$3.5[1] to US$3.8 million[2]" → "$3.5–$3.8 million[1][2]"
Fixed
"US$50 million[3] to US$56 million[2]" → "$50–56 million[3][2]"
Fixed
So is "US$" going to be changed to just "$"?
Lead
Remove the comma after "directed by Sidney Lumet".
Done
Remove the comma after "written by Frank Pierson".
Oh, yea I mistook it with
this one that is some kind of amalgam of two news pieces by different news wires the New Jersey Home News edited together. The examiner ran the piece of Newsday. Fixed--GDuwenHoller!21:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
I think there's a rule on Wiki that says that every quote needs a reference right after the quotation marks so I would just cite the same source again after each "end-quote".
I don't see anything wrong with the citation being at the end of the phrase. I could only find on
Wikipedia:Quotations that citations have to be provided. Do you have any other link of the MoS? In my estimation, if the quote can be found on the cited website/newspaper/book, it should be enough.--GDuwenHoller!21:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
I think I found the rule at
WP:UNSOURCED and
WP:MINREF, which say to "attribute all quotations".
Let's better be on the safe side of the rule. I'll just go ahead and repeat the inline citation for each quote. I may be the type of reader that finds them bothersome and prefers it at the end of the phrase, but we can cover all bases.--GDuwenHoller!19:04, 24 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Change all quotation uses of "..." to "[...]", in this section and in #Production.
About that use, it is not clear to me which one is right. Two members of the
GOCE worked on the article before I nominated it, and they changed the former [...]. I suppose they know something I don't.--GDuwenHoller!21:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Production
"bridges, beaches and neighborhoods" → "bridges, beaches, and neighborhoods"
Remove the comma after "own clothes".
"hotel those" → "hotel for those"
"To amplify the effect in film" → "To amplify the effect in the film"
The nominee for the British Academy Film Award for Best Film should be for the film, not the director.
Fixed
What makes the Online Film & Television Association notable for the list (it doesn't look official)?
Not sure what to make out of that award. I see it listed throughout Wikipedia (most of List of awards and nominations received by xx). I think though, it may be relevant enough. It appears in news pieces written the last few years, and a quick Google search reveals around 45,000 pages mentioning it.--GDuwenHoller!21:02, 26 February 2021 (UTC)reply
The nominee for the British Academy Film Award for Best Direction should be for the director, not the film.
I linked as many of the publishers and authors as possible. About archiving the URLs, I took care of that last week manually on the internet archive.--GDuwenHoller!19:54, 24 February 2021 (UTC)reply
There is a reference with a typo ("Los Ageles Times"), so I would change it.
Thanks for taking the review, and for your usual careful work reviewing citations. I'll go marking your requests as done, or providing further commentary as we go through the process.--GDuwenHoller!21:14, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Move Thomas Moore to after P. F. Kluge with {{Based on|"The Boys in the Bank"|P. F. Kluge and Thomas Moore}} since they both wrote the article.
Done
Also, is his name Thomas Moore or Thomas Mooreen (as seen in #Pre-production)?
Fixed
The poster usually serves as a source for the infobox, but
Victor J. Kemper isn't mentioned so he needs a reference.
Kemper is mentioned a couple of times throughout the article: in the Production, Reception and Legacy sections. The story by Kluge and Moore is not mentioned in the poster either, but we have the mentions along the article.--GDuwenHoller!20:45, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Running time needs a reference.
Done
It has already been established that the film was American so US$ isn't needed in the infobox.
Fixed
"US$3.5[1] to US$3.8 million[2]" → "$3.5–$3.8 million[1][2]"
Fixed
"US$50 million[3] to US$56 million[2]" → "$50–56 million[3][2]"
Fixed
So is "US$" going to be changed to just "$"?
Lead
Remove the comma after "directed by Sidney Lumet".
Done
Remove the comma after "written by Frank Pierson".
Oh, yea I mistook it with
this one that is some kind of amalgam of two news pieces by different news wires the New Jersey Home News edited together. The examiner ran the piece of Newsday. Fixed--GDuwenHoller!21:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
I think there's a rule on Wiki that says that every quote needs a reference right after the quotation marks so I would just cite the same source again after each "end-quote".
I don't see anything wrong with the citation being at the end of the phrase. I could only find on
Wikipedia:Quotations that citations have to be provided. Do you have any other link of the MoS? In my estimation, if the quote can be found on the cited website/newspaper/book, it should be enough.--GDuwenHoller!21:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
I think I found the rule at
WP:UNSOURCED and
WP:MINREF, which say to "attribute all quotations".
Let's better be on the safe side of the rule. I'll just go ahead and repeat the inline citation for each quote. I may be the type of reader that finds them bothersome and prefers it at the end of the phrase, but we can cover all bases.--GDuwenHoller!19:04, 24 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Change all quotation uses of "..." to "[...]", in this section and in #Production.
About that use, it is not clear to me which one is right. Two members of the
GOCE worked on the article before I nominated it, and they changed the former [...]. I suppose they know something I don't.--GDuwenHoller!21:11, 23 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Production
"bridges, beaches and neighborhoods" → "bridges, beaches, and neighborhoods"
Remove the comma after "own clothes".
"hotel those" → "hotel for those"
"To amplify the effect in film" → "To amplify the effect in the film"
The nominee for the British Academy Film Award for Best Film should be for the film, not the director.
Fixed
What makes the Online Film & Television Association notable for the list (it doesn't look official)?
Not sure what to make out of that award. I see it listed throughout Wikipedia (most of List of awards and nominations received by xx). I think though, it may be relevant enough. It appears in news pieces written the last few years, and a quick Google search reveals around 45,000 pages mentioning it.--GDuwenHoller!21:02, 26 February 2021 (UTC)reply
The nominee for the British Academy Film Award for Best Direction should be for the director, not the film.
I linked as many of the publishers and authors as possible. About archiving the URLs, I took care of that last week manually on the internet archive.--GDuwenHoller!19:54, 24 February 2021 (UTC)reply
There is a reference with a typo ("Los Ageles Times"), so I would change it.