prominent influences from the '80s -> what influences? Needs to be specified. Also 1980s not 80s.
Here's what source says: This uplifting pop number with prominent '80s influences from The-Dream. So? How should I be specific? I changed btw to 1980s. — Tomica(talk)09:04, 4 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Yes but you need to clarify what is influenced from the 1980s, so you would write -> "prominent influences of music from the 1980s".
Nash also co-wrote two more songs on the album: its fourth single "Birthday Cake" and "Red Lipstick which is also featured on the deluxe edition of Talk That Talk (2011). Red Lipstick needs closing quotation mark. Make clear which one is featured on the deluxe version - Birthday Cake or Red Lipstick?
"Do Ya Thang" is a R&B song with prominent influences from the '80s that runs for 3 minutes and 44 seconds. Again, same with lead for the 1980s. "Runs for" is colloquial -> change to "has a length of".
According to Maz Hallima from Flavour Magazine "Do Ya Thang" has a very "teenager-ish vibe" -> Change "from Flavour Magazine" to "of Flavour Magazine". Also, needs a comma between "Magazine" and "Do".
Michael Jepson of The Fourth State concluded that "Do Ya Thang" together with "Cockiness (Love It)" and "Roc Me Out" -> comma between "Thang" and "together" and after "Roc Me Out"
According to Jepson, all of them are "blatantly raunchy" and feel like a follow up to Rihanna's 2011 single "S&M" (Loud, 2011) -> how does this pertain to the song in question?
Well, he compares the song, together with other tracks from the album with S&M. I mean its important as of its sexual themes. — Tomica(talk)09:04, 4 April 2012 (UTC)reply
That's ok, but I would change "all of them" to "all three songs".
prominent influences from the '80s -> what influences? Needs to be specified. Also 1980s not 80s.
Here's what source says: This uplifting pop number with prominent '80s influences from The-Dream. So? How should I be specific? I changed btw to 1980s. — Tomica(talk)09:04, 4 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Yes but you need to clarify what is influenced from the 1980s, so you would write -> "prominent influences of music from the 1980s".
Nash also co-wrote two more songs on the album: its fourth single "Birthday Cake" and "Red Lipstick which is also featured on the deluxe edition of Talk That Talk (2011). Red Lipstick needs closing quotation mark. Make clear which one is featured on the deluxe version - Birthday Cake or Red Lipstick?
"Do Ya Thang" is a R&B song with prominent influences from the '80s that runs for 3 minutes and 44 seconds. Again, same with lead for the 1980s. "Runs for" is colloquial -> change to "has a length of".
According to Maz Hallima from Flavour Magazine "Do Ya Thang" has a very "teenager-ish vibe" -> Change "from Flavour Magazine" to "of Flavour Magazine". Also, needs a comma between "Magazine" and "Do".
Michael Jepson of The Fourth State concluded that "Do Ya Thang" together with "Cockiness (Love It)" and "Roc Me Out" -> comma between "Thang" and "together" and after "Roc Me Out"
According to Jepson, all of them are "blatantly raunchy" and feel like a follow up to Rihanna's 2011 single "S&M" (Loud, 2011) -> how does this pertain to the song in question?
Well, he compares the song, together with other tracks from the album with S&M. I mean its important as of its sexual themes. — Tomica(talk)09:04, 4 April 2012 (UTC)reply
That's ok, but I would change "all of them" to "all three songs".