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Reviewer: Basilisk4u ( talk · contribs) 01:11, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
Hey! I am going to review this article. Yay! Basilisk4u ( talk) 01:11, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
"sizzling" - this should be in quotes. I am not sure if any of your sources necessarily refer to the beat as "sturdy"
Looks fine :D
Great job!
Okay I have finished the review and put it on hold :)
"Aharoni">Calvin ]]• TalkThatTalk 17:54, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
Calvin • TalkThatTalk 16:12, 12 November 2011 (UTC)
Will continue other sections a bit later. Calvin • TalkThatTalk 14:36, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
Change to:
"Disturbia" is a song by Barbadian recording artist Rihanna, taken from the re-release, Good Girl Gone Bad: Reloaded (2008), of her third studio album Good Girl Gone Bad (2007). The song was released as the third single from the reloaded edition of the album, and seventh overall. The song was written by Andre Merritt, Chris Brown, Brian Kennedy, Rob. A, with production of the song completed by Kennedy. "Disturbia" is an uptempo dance-pop and electro-pop song with a "sizzling" beat. [1] [2] "Disturbia" was well received by music critics with many of them praising its dark musical tone, lyrics and beat.
"Disturbia" debuted at number eighteen in the US Billboard Hot 100 and became Rihanna's then highest debut. Later, it managed to reach number-one on the chart, and stayed there for two consecutive weeks. With that the song became Rihanna's third number-one single from Good Girl Gone Bad and fourth overall in the United States. The song also reached number one in Belgium (Flanders) and New Zealand and became a top-ten hit in more than twenty countries including Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom. The accompanying music video for "Disturbia" was directed by American director Anthony Mandler, and portrays Rihanna in various situations such as in a prison cell and gas chamber. "Disturbia" has regularly featured in Rihanna's tours and live performances since its release. The song was part of the set-list on her three major tours: Good Girl Gone Bad (2007—09), Last Girl on Earth (2010—11) and Loud Tour (2011).
A lot of it was waffle, the Lead was too long for the article, which isn't that long. Calvin • TalkThatTalk 16:53, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
Will start later today. Calvin • TalkThatTalk 13:08, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
All of my concerns have been addressed. As this is not a featured article review, any more concerns can be fixed later. This review has been going on for too long, and Calvin does not appear to be active in the discussion anymore. I strongly believe that this article currently meets the GA standard, and this should be acknowledged. Congratulations! Basilisk4u ( talk) 23:50, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Basilisk4u ( talk · contribs) 01:11, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
Hey! I am going to review this article. Yay! Basilisk4u ( talk) 01:11, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
"sizzling" - this should be in quotes. I am not sure if any of your sources necessarily refer to the beat as "sturdy"
Looks fine :D
Great job!
Okay I have finished the review and put it on hold :)
"Aharoni">Calvin ]]• TalkThatTalk 17:54, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
Calvin • TalkThatTalk 16:12, 12 November 2011 (UTC)
Will continue other sections a bit later. Calvin • TalkThatTalk 14:36, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
Change to:
"Disturbia" is a song by Barbadian recording artist Rihanna, taken from the re-release, Good Girl Gone Bad: Reloaded (2008), of her third studio album Good Girl Gone Bad (2007). The song was released as the third single from the reloaded edition of the album, and seventh overall. The song was written by Andre Merritt, Chris Brown, Brian Kennedy, Rob. A, with production of the song completed by Kennedy. "Disturbia" is an uptempo dance-pop and electro-pop song with a "sizzling" beat. [1] [2] "Disturbia" was well received by music critics with many of them praising its dark musical tone, lyrics and beat.
"Disturbia" debuted at number eighteen in the US Billboard Hot 100 and became Rihanna's then highest debut. Later, it managed to reach number-one on the chart, and stayed there for two consecutive weeks. With that the song became Rihanna's third number-one single from Good Girl Gone Bad and fourth overall in the United States. The song also reached number one in Belgium (Flanders) and New Zealand and became a top-ten hit in more than twenty countries including Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom. The accompanying music video for "Disturbia" was directed by American director Anthony Mandler, and portrays Rihanna in various situations such as in a prison cell and gas chamber. "Disturbia" has regularly featured in Rihanna's tours and live performances since its release. The song was part of the set-list on her three major tours: Good Girl Gone Bad (2007—09), Last Girl on Earth (2010—11) and Loud Tour (2011).
A lot of it was waffle, the Lead was too long for the article, which isn't that long. Calvin • TalkThatTalk 16:53, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
Will start later today. Calvin • TalkThatTalk 13:08, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
All of my concerns have been addressed. As this is not a featured article review, any more concerns can be fixed later. This review has been going on for too long, and Calvin does not appear to be active in the discussion anymore. I strongly believe that this article currently meets the GA standard, and this should be acknowledged. Congratulations! Basilisk4u ( talk) 23:50, 27 November 2011 (UTC)