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So far, it is a very well designed article already. When you say "The monumental vase is hollow at the bottom, reinforcing its function as a grave marker and not a mixing bowl", did you mean that there is a hole in the bottom that would allow liquid to flow out? You might want to clarify how/why a hollow in the bottom makes it a grave marker. A small caption under the picture would be useful.
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Hi Noah, I think your article looks good so far! Your description of the krater itself is well written and detailed. I think you could even compare this maybe to other geometric kraters to show why this one is more important. Overall, keep working it looks great. Sunniobrien ( talk) 21:45, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Sunni O'Brien
Hi Noah - this is a great start to your article! Here are a few suggestions for improvement.
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So far, it is a very well designed article already. When you say "The monumental vase is hollow at the bottom, reinforcing its function as a grave marker and not a mixing bowl", did you mean that there is a hole in the bottom that would allow liquid to flow out? You might want to clarify how/why a hollow in the bottom makes it a grave marker. A small caption under the picture would be useful.
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
Njpetersen.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 20:06, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 August 2021 and 10 December 2021. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
Lteran18.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 20:06, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi Noah, I think your article looks good so far! Your description of the krater itself is well written and detailed. I think you could even compare this maybe to other geometric kraters to show why this one is more important. Overall, keep working it looks great. Sunniobrien ( talk) 21:45, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Sunni O'Brien
Hi Noah - this is a great start to your article! Here are a few suggestions for improvement.