"Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary about his trips to
Mumbai and
New York City in 1996 and a story by a friend of his" → "Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary, detailing his trips to
Mumbai and
New York City in 1996, and a story by a friend of his"
"Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary about his trips to
Mumbai and
New York City in 1996 and a story by a friend of his" → "Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary, detailing his trips to
Mumbai and
New York City in 1996, and a story by a friend of his"