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"So buying this subscription adds a pint glass graphic to the bottom of the screen for inspectors to see, furthermore the graphic changes at certain times which the inspector is only in knowledge of when this change will occur."
Good grief! Who wrote this sentence? It's both a fragment and a run-on! I have some ideas about how to fix it. Let me suggest this:
Can anyone else do better? If so, make your own corrections and place them into the article. 108.246.205.134 ( talk) 16:34, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
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"So buying this subscription adds a pint glass graphic to the bottom of the screen for inspectors to see, furthermore the graphic changes at certain times which the inspector is only in knowledge of when this change will occur."
Good grief! Who wrote this sentence? It's both a fragment and a run-on! I have some ideas about how to fix it. Let me suggest this:
Can anyone else do better? If so, make your own corrections and place them into the article. 108.246.205.134 ( talk) 16:34, 24 July 2013 (UTC)