This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Plot, I have a question, is this necessary ---> "(Connie and her friends. After letting them get their potshots in while she fills a burlap sack up with cans of soda from a nearby vending machine, she walks over and hits all five of them with the sack, then picks up Connie's head and tongue-kisses her)"?
In the lead, "...and aired on January 31, 2010 on Fox" ---> "...and aired on January 31, 2010, on Fox", commas after dates, if using MDY. In the Cultural references section, italicize "TV Guide", since it's a magazine. Same section, "The Ballad of Billy the Kid" is not supposed to be in italics but in quotation marks, since it's a song.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Like last time, thank you to Ctjf for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE)18:24, 29 June 2010 (UTC)reply
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Plot, I have a question, is this necessary ---> "(Connie and her friends. After letting them get their potshots in while she fills a burlap sack up with cans of soda from a nearby vending machine, she walks over and hits all five of them with the sack, then picks up Connie's head and tongue-kisses her)"?
In the lead, "...and aired on January 31, 2010 on Fox" ---> "...and aired on January 31, 2010, on Fox", commas after dates, if using MDY. In the Cultural references section, italicize "TV Guide", since it's a magazine. Same section, "The Ballad of Billy the Kid" is not supposed to be in italics but in quotation marks, since it's a song.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Like last time, thank you to Ctjf for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE)18:24, 29 June 2010 (UTC)reply