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Reviewer: Khazar2 ( talk · contribs) 13:33, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 13:33, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
On first pass, this looks very good. I see that things have been a bit contentious on the talk page at points, but having two experienced editors double-checking each other seems to have been much to this article's benefit. You're both to be congratulated. I've got some quibbles, listed below; mostly they're suggestions for adding a touch more context for clarity. I also made a few tweaks as I went. Feel free to revert any with which you disagree. -- Khazar2 ( talk) 16:20, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | See one opinion above that should probably be attributed intext in two places |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Pass as GA |
Now it would be good to aim for eventual FA status. To that end:
This is a particularly appropriate image, not least since it was used in some very early editions of this very work. It illustrates the main article. What is the problem with the US copyright, and can it be resolved?
I intend to try to help to make this section more appropriate and relevant to the work. A few things which may appear to be even more relevant to the subject matter of the insecurity of health and life, than the current material:
Straw Cat ( talk) 14:02, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Khazar2 ( talk · contribs) 13:33, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 13:33, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
On first pass, this looks very good. I see that things have been a bit contentious on the talk page at points, but having two experienced editors double-checking each other seems to have been much to this article's benefit. You're both to be congratulated. I've got some quibbles, listed below; mostly they're suggestions for adding a touch more context for clarity. I also made a few tweaks as I went. Feel free to revert any with which you disagree. -- Khazar2 ( talk) 16:20, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | See one opinion above that should probably be attributed intext in two places |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Pass as GA |
Now it would be good to aim for eventual FA status. To that end:
This is a particularly appropriate image, not least since it was used in some very early editions of this very work. It illustrates the main article. What is the problem with the US copyright, and can it be resolved?
I intend to try to help to make this section more appropriate and relevant to the work. A few things which may appear to be even more relevant to the subject matter of the insecurity of health and life, than the current material:
Straw Cat ( talk) 14:02, 8 July 2013 (UTC)