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Hi Suhib,
I like the flow and content of your article.
The most substantial improvement I could think of is to work on the wording. It would be great to spend some time making your sentences a little more eloquent.
Your image is pretty basic, but does a nice job illustrating the concept.
Cheers,
Adam
Hey Suhib, You have added quite a good bit of information from the first review and your original image looks much better. Way to go! Here are some suggestions for improving your article:
The only other suggestion is to have someone proofread the article for grammar and sentence flow. It won't take much and it will make it easier to read. I think it is a great topic and you have done a great job! Eblamble ( talk) 05:25, 7 April 2014 (UTC) Erica
This article is rated C-class on Wikipedia's
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Hi Suhib,
I like the flow and content of your article.
The most substantial improvement I could think of is to work on the wording. It would be great to spend some time making your sentences a little more eloquent.
Your image is pretty basic, but does a nice job illustrating the concept.
Cheers,
Adam
Hey Suhib, You have added quite a good bit of information from the first review and your original image looks much better. Way to go! Here are some suggestions for improving your article:
The only other suggestion is to have someone proofread the article for grammar and sentence flow. It won't take much and it will make it easier to read. I think it is a great topic and you have done a great job! Eblamble ( talk) 05:25, 7 April 2014 (UTC) Erica