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Reviewer: Rjjiii ( talk · contribs) 20:59, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
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https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Deshong_Art_Museum&oldid=1173834657
fireproof with exterior walls of Dover marble
fireproof construction with the exterior walls of white Dover marble
It contained over 300 pieces of art including carved Japanese ivory figures, Chinese carved hard stone vessels and 19th century American and European paintings
The art collection - more than 300 pieces - contains carved Japanese ivory figures, Chinese carved hard-stone vessels, and 19th-century American and European paintings.
American Impressionists Edward Redfield, Robert Spencer and George Loftus Noyes.
American impressionists Edward Redfield, Robert Spencer, and George L. Noyes.
Teenager Laurence McCall from Chester, Pennsylvania, started stealing paintings from the gallery in September 1976.strikes me as very odd. Obviously he is not a teenager today if he was alive in 1976. The sources include a contemporary news article and an interview with McCall. I notice and see others mention (on DYK) conflicting information in the sources regarding this. My advice would be to gather the best sources and limit Wikipedia's content to agreed upon information or information from the highest quality sources.
I can't pass this due to issues with close paraphrasing and content not verified by the references. The copyright violation within Wikipedia is fairly easy to resolve since all articles have the same license. Post over at the
Wikipedia:Teahouse if you have any issues or confusion with that. Finally regarding broad coverage, there may not be much more available but the museum was in operation for over 50 years and the only thing the article mentions during those years is when it was robbed.
You are welcome to ask questions and to renominate the article at any time. Regards, Rjjiii( talk) 20:59, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
Widener University leased the building in 1979 and restored the museum.
In 1979, Widener University leased the museum and restored the art galleryAnd from that same source:
The art collection and $500,000 of the trust were given to Widener University and the collection is currently displayed there.
The art collection and $500,000 of the Deshong Trust was given to Widener, where the collection was housed at the university museum building.
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Reviewer: Rjjiii ( talk · contribs) 20:59, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
Source review for this version of the article:
https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Deshong_Art_Museum&oldid=1173834657
fireproof with exterior walls of Dover marble
fireproof construction with the exterior walls of white Dover marble
It contained over 300 pieces of art including carved Japanese ivory figures, Chinese carved hard stone vessels and 19th century American and European paintings
The art collection - more than 300 pieces - contains carved Japanese ivory figures, Chinese carved hard-stone vessels, and 19th-century American and European paintings.
American Impressionists Edward Redfield, Robert Spencer and George Loftus Noyes.
American impressionists Edward Redfield, Robert Spencer, and George L. Noyes.
Teenager Laurence McCall from Chester, Pennsylvania, started stealing paintings from the gallery in September 1976.strikes me as very odd. Obviously he is not a teenager today if he was alive in 1976. The sources include a contemporary news article and an interview with McCall. I notice and see others mention (on DYK) conflicting information in the sources regarding this. My advice would be to gather the best sources and limit Wikipedia's content to agreed upon information or information from the highest quality sources.
I can't pass this due to issues with close paraphrasing and content not verified by the references. The copyright violation within Wikipedia is fairly easy to resolve since all articles have the same license. Post over at the
Wikipedia:Teahouse if you have any issues or confusion with that. Finally regarding broad coverage, there may not be much more available but the museum was in operation for over 50 years and the only thing the article mentions during those years is when it was robbed.
You are welcome to ask questions and to renominate the article at any time. Regards, Rjjiii( talk) 20:59, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
Widener University leased the building in 1979 and restored the museum.
In 1979, Widener University leased the museum and restored the art galleryAnd from that same source:
The art collection and $500,000 of the trust were given to Widener University and the collection is currently displayed there.
The art collection and $500,000 of the Deshong Trust was given to Widener, where the collection was housed at the university museum building.