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Why isn't this page at the title 'Derawar Fort?' —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ardou ( talk • contribs) 21:01, March 22, 2007
The third paragraph at this time has poor english and is written in an opinion style.
I believe a proper preservation efforts/history/future section could be added. 209.33.216.162 ( talk) 15:26, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
The article states: "Derawar fort was first built in the 9th century AD by Rai Jajja bhati". But in the following paragraph, it states: "In 711 CE, the fort was captured by the Arab Umayyad commander Muhammad ibn Qasim". If the fort was only built in the 9th century, it makes no sense for it to have been captured in the 8th century. In addition, there does not seem to be any source for this aforementioned claim. Dastarn Khan ( talk) 18:03, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2023 and 8 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): SydtheSquid16 ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Alibshiz.
— Assignment last updated by Alibshiz ( talk) 18:43, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
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Why isn't this page at the title 'Derawar Fort?' —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ardou ( talk • contribs) 21:01, March 22, 2007
The third paragraph at this time has poor english and is written in an opinion style.
I believe a proper preservation efforts/history/future section could be added. 209.33.216.162 ( talk) 15:26, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
The article states: "Derawar fort was first built in the 9th century AD by Rai Jajja bhati". But in the following paragraph, it states: "In 711 CE, the fort was captured by the Arab Umayyad commander Muhammad ibn Qasim". If the fort was only built in the 9th century, it makes no sense for it to have been captured in the 8th century. In addition, there does not seem to be any source for this aforementioned claim. Dastarn Khan ( talk) 18:03, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2023 and 8 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): SydtheSquid16 ( article contribs). Peer reviewers: Alibshiz.
— Assignment last updated by Alibshiz ( talk) 18:43, 8 December 2023 (UTC)