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Hello. Here are a few suggestions that could improve your page:
Maybe adding her birthday beside her name in parenthesis rather than having it under Early Life and Education. This could be found in other Wikipedia pages.
There are a couple of instances where you will translate names of institutions in English but I think that maybe you can keep the name in French and add beside the English translation.
Grammatical errors to check up on more as well as errors in school names.
If you use accents in location names I would try to stay consistent with it.
The second sentence under Career is missing Italics for the films.
Statements like "Back in Quebec" or "In (insert date)" could maybe use more commas.
In Career you use the word crue in a sentence other than the title of her film. If non-French speakers read it they may not know what it is. So maybe you can use flood as you did previously in that paragraph.
Maybe you can mention what French Festival it is in the last sentence of your second paragraph in Career.
I find that your subject is interesting and that you did a great job overall.
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on the course page. Student editor(s):
Sandyderulo. Peer reviewers:
Filmstudiesclass01,
Kay2416.
Hello. Here are a few suggestions that could improve your page:
Maybe adding her birthday beside her name in parenthesis rather than having it under Early Life and Education. This could be found in other Wikipedia pages.
There are a couple of instances where you will translate names of institutions in English but I think that maybe you can keep the name in French and add beside the English translation.
Grammatical errors to check up on more as well as errors in school names.
If you use accents in location names I would try to stay consistent with it.
The second sentence under Career is missing Italics for the films.
Statements like "Back in Quebec" or "In (insert date)" could maybe use more commas.
In Career you use the word crue in a sentence other than the title of her film. If non-French speakers read it they may not know what it is. So maybe you can use flood as you did previously in that paragraph.
Maybe you can mention what French Festival it is in the last sentence of your second paragraph in Career.
I find that your subject is interesting and that you did a great job overall.