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Should this not be at Democratic Left Movement (Lebanon) or Movement of the Democratic Left? Palmiro | Talk 14:24, 23 November 2005 (UTC)
Could someone define the word "courant", as used in "However, DLM supports the existence of courants ..." and in several instances following. teneriff 03:20, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
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The following are additional comments I intended to raise at the peer review, which was closed before I got back to it:-
**Suggest change section name to "Early history", as it only deals with the foundation in September 2004, and the assassinations a year later.
**To avoid repetitions of the full title "Lebanese Communist Party" I have introduced the acronym "LCP" a few times, or otherwise referred to "the party"
*Assassinations: Why the multiple citations in the first sentence? Simple matters of fact need only a single, reliable source. As it stands, the sentence is difficult to read. Same point arises in the second paragraph.
*The Structure and composition section has one brief subsection on internal elections, but tells us nothing of the DML's structure and composition. In the Internal elections subsection:-
**The word "own" in the first sentence is unnecessary : Done
**The term "National Assembly", in this usage, needs a bit of explanation. I take it to be the ruling committee of the new party, but this needs to be clarified.
**Rather than "not lose", say "retain": Done
**"...while insisting on being a part of March 14." What does this mean?
**Ideology: "Thus, the DLM's ideology is a broad leftist platform that forms the common denominator among its constituents." Whose summary is this? If it is part of the Majed interview, it ought to be attributed to him.
**Domestic Policy: Wording like "one of the few parties", "vehemently", "strongly" give this section a POV feel. You need to remove non-neutral adjectives to remain encyclopedic. : Done
**Cedar revolution: POV - suggest delete "unprecedented" and change "meddling" to "interference". Also, is "presumably from Syria" part of the stated goal, or is this editorial assumption? : Done
**Electoral results: "Representing the Maronite seat of Tripoli..." doesn't make sense (a seat representing a seat?) Rewording required. Also, this is the fourth mention of the March 14 Alliance, without any explanation of what it is. : Done
Hope these comments help. Brianboulton ( talk) 19:46, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
Thanks! I'm working on it. Mnation2 ( talk) 03:18, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
Review process started. Yazan ( talk) 05:41, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
This a well-written compact article, good job!
Nonetheless, there are a few issues that need to be fixed before it can be promoted to GA:
I am putting the article on hold for 7 days until these issues are addressed. Feel free to contact me when you feel that the issues are resolved. Happy editing. Yazan ( talk) 06:20, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for starting the review! I've trimmed the lead a bit and moved the cedar revolution section to history for now, but will be out of town for the next few days. I should be back in time to complete the recommended changes before 7 days has passed. Thanks again, Mnation2 ( talk) 19:51, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I am glad to promote this to GA-status. You've put great work in here, and its been a pleasure reviewing it. Would love to see this happens to more articles in WP-Lebanon. Best, Yazan ( talk) 16:20, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
I would like to nominate this article for a-class review. In order to promote the article, two non-involved editors must support it without any opposes. I guess I'll have to find some reviewers... Mnation2 ( talk) 02:32, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
Technical issues:
**Is DLM a common enough acronym to be mentioned in the first line?
**Bold HYD
**The first mention of the Lebanese Communist Party requires "Lebanese Communist Party(LCP)" since LCP is used throughout.
Hawi assassinations" sections. "Georges Hawi [...] was" -> "Georges Hawi... was"
Content issues (primary importance)
Thanks a ton for your input! I'm working on it... Mnation2 ( talk) 02:26, 8 November 2009 (UTC)
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Should this not be at Democratic Left Movement (Lebanon) or Movement of the Democratic Left? Palmiro | Talk 14:24, 23 November 2005 (UTC)
Could someone define the word "courant", as used in "However, DLM supports the existence of courants ..." and in several instances following. teneriff 03:20, 11 December 2006 (UTC)
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The following are additional comments I intended to raise at the peer review, which was closed before I got back to it:-
**Suggest change section name to "Early history", as it only deals with the foundation in September 2004, and the assassinations a year later.
**To avoid repetitions of the full title "Lebanese Communist Party" I have introduced the acronym "LCP" a few times, or otherwise referred to "the party"
*Assassinations: Why the multiple citations in the first sentence? Simple matters of fact need only a single, reliable source. As it stands, the sentence is difficult to read. Same point arises in the second paragraph.
*The Structure and composition section has one brief subsection on internal elections, but tells us nothing of the DML's structure and composition. In the Internal elections subsection:-
**The word "own" in the first sentence is unnecessary : Done
**The term "National Assembly", in this usage, needs a bit of explanation. I take it to be the ruling committee of the new party, but this needs to be clarified.
**Rather than "not lose", say "retain": Done
**"...while insisting on being a part of March 14." What does this mean?
**Ideology: "Thus, the DLM's ideology is a broad leftist platform that forms the common denominator among its constituents." Whose summary is this? If it is part of the Majed interview, it ought to be attributed to him.
**Domestic Policy: Wording like "one of the few parties", "vehemently", "strongly" give this section a POV feel. You need to remove non-neutral adjectives to remain encyclopedic. : Done
**Cedar revolution: POV - suggest delete "unprecedented" and change "meddling" to "interference". Also, is "presumably from Syria" part of the stated goal, or is this editorial assumption? : Done
**Electoral results: "Representing the Maronite seat of Tripoli..." doesn't make sense (a seat representing a seat?) Rewording required. Also, this is the fourth mention of the March 14 Alliance, without any explanation of what it is. : Done
Hope these comments help. Brianboulton ( talk) 19:46, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
Thanks! I'm working on it. Mnation2 ( talk) 03:18, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
Review process started. Yazan ( talk) 05:41, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
This a well-written compact article, good job!
Nonetheless, there are a few issues that need to be fixed before it can be promoted to GA:
I am putting the article on hold for 7 days until these issues are addressed. Feel free to contact me when you feel that the issues are resolved. Happy editing. Yazan ( talk) 06:20, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for starting the review! I've trimmed the lead a bit and moved the cedar revolution section to history for now, but will be out of town for the next few days. I should be back in time to complete the recommended changes before 7 days has passed. Thanks again, Mnation2 ( talk) 19:51, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I am glad to promote this to GA-status. You've put great work in here, and its been a pleasure reviewing it. Would love to see this happens to more articles in WP-Lebanon. Best, Yazan ( talk) 16:20, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
I would like to nominate this article for a-class review. In order to promote the article, two non-involved editors must support it without any opposes. I guess I'll have to find some reviewers... Mnation2 ( talk) 02:32, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
Technical issues:
**Is DLM a common enough acronym to be mentioned in the first line?
**Bold HYD
**The first mention of the Lebanese Communist Party requires "Lebanese Communist Party(LCP)" since LCP is used throughout.
Hawi assassinations" sections. "Georges Hawi [...] was" -> "Georges Hawi... was"
Content issues (primary importance)
Thanks a ton for your input! I'm working on it... Mnation2 ( talk) 02:26, 8 November 2009 (UTC)
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