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Reviewer: Sven Manguard ( talk · contribs) 20:57, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
GAN Quicksheet 1.24 SM
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Starting comments: Per request of the author,
Madalibi, I will be doing the GA review for this. Please give me a few days.
Sven Manguard
Wha?
20:57, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
1. Well written:
[[Kangxi_Emperor#Disputed_succession|crisis]]
? I am assuming that you're referring to that in this sentence.2. Accurate and verifiable:
Section acceptable
3. Broad in coverage:
4. Neutral:
Section acceptable
6. Image use:
Section acceptable
7. Additional items not required for a GA, but requested by the reviewer:
Section acceptable
Comments after the initial review: Another well written piece. I left some comments in 1a and 3a. Message me when you're ready for me to take another look.
Sven Manguard
Wha?
05:37, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
I am going to go ahead and bump this up to GA status, because it's 99% there now.
I have only one issue, which is a minor one. In the line "After Dorgon's death on the last day of 1650, the Shunzhi Emperor started his personal rule: he ordered the members of the Council to memorialize to him directly on important matters of state.", I am unclear as to what you mean by "memorialize", as it doesn't seem a fitting word based on the definition I am used to. That sentence might be better served with a different word.
That being said, this is GA quality work with or without that sentence, and I am not going to drag out the process for one minor change.
PROMOTED Sven Manguard Wha? 01:14, 14 January 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sven Manguard ( talk · contribs) 20:57, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
GAN Quicksheet 1.24 SM
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Starting comments: Per request of the author,
Madalibi, I will be doing the GA review for this. Please give me a few days.
Sven Manguard
Wha?
20:57, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
1. Well written:
[[Kangxi_Emperor#Disputed_succession|crisis]]
? I am assuming that you're referring to that in this sentence.2. Accurate and verifiable:
Section acceptable
3. Broad in coverage:
4. Neutral:
Section acceptable
6. Image use:
Section acceptable
7. Additional items not required for a GA, but requested by the reviewer:
Section acceptable
Comments after the initial review: Another well written piece. I left some comments in 1a and 3a. Message me when you're ready for me to take another look.
Sven Manguard
Wha?
05:37, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
I am going to go ahead and bump this up to GA status, because it's 99% there now.
I have only one issue, which is a minor one. In the line "After Dorgon's death on the last day of 1650, the Shunzhi Emperor started his personal rule: he ordered the members of the Council to memorialize to him directly on important matters of state.", I am unclear as to what you mean by "memorialize", as it doesn't seem a fitting word based on the definition I am used to. That sentence might be better served with a different word.
That being said, this is GA quality work with or without that sentence, and I am not going to drag out the process for one minor change.
PROMOTED Sven Manguard Wha? 01:14, 14 January 2014 (UTC)